Letting Go and Hanging On With Darren White

Each new day, each long night
I reach for you who gave me life. 
You search for you in me, as life has gone
My heart bleeds life into you
who gave and gave, now fading so fast    

In time undefined, conversation left stranded
we reach out, we let go, empty handed
cluelessly knowing.

you smile, laugh broadly
greet people in passing
no face needs a name
somethings don't ever change
hearts will always hang on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Vaso Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 8:22 PM
I came to read this again, I am dreaming and hoping his days will be brighter!!!!
Duet Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Nice poem, Sara Ella. I'm sure the situation with your mother is very difficult but she must have a big heart to go with those big smiles.
Ella Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 4:59 PM
I just read your lovely poem "Mother" - a beautiful tribute <3
Ella Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Thank you Carole :) Yes, her smile and heart are the sweetest <3
Vaso Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 10:53 PM
I only wish there was more poetry for us to read!!!! :)
Ella Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 11:15 PM
Will do! Thank you :)
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 7:28 AM
- :))) ... thanks for giving me a picture of Darren ... I did not really get my own picture of him :))) - A great poem ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ella Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 11:14 PM
Ha! :) Darren was so helpful with this idea of mine. Thank you Anne-Lise!
Ricci Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 6:31 AM
Good Morning Sara. I'm sorry I missed this one. Good Day to you also Mr. Darren. I love this. I so see the beauty within this entry. Thank you both for warming the heart of the reader and for placing a smile too. Well done with style. Have a wonderful day to both of you.
Ella Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Thank you Lisa! It was inspired by my Mom. Darren was so helpful too :)
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 11:24 PM
I am not sure to smile or cry, such lovely poetry!
Ella Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 5:04 AM
Thank you Art :) <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 7:17 AM
This is lovely Sara :) These smiles are genuine. I will share with my dear friend caring for her mother with dementia, thank you.
Ella Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Thank you Maureen <3 I hope your friend finds a smile in this too :)
Green Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 6:09 AM
This was sadly beautiful Sara and that last stanza was heart breaking to me. "no face needs a name" That line alone made me tear up. I can't even imagine what that must be like. Very nicely written my friend.
Ella Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 6:35 AM
Good Morning Chris :) Thank you <3 I was thinking of my Mom who doesn't remember much but still likes to smile.
White Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 5:08 AM
I love your wonderful poem Sara <3 So warm and gentle and full of love.
Ella Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 5:30 AM
Thank you so much for your help with this <3 Little kitten may be upside down but still is holding on! :D
White Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 5:10 AM
Is that me by the way? Standing on my head? ;)
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Such a sweet poem...her heart is always near.
Ella Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Thank you Tim! It is about my Mom and her dementia but it doesn't conquer her heart <3
Wolf Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Sara, the poetic drought is finally over for you I see! A lovely addition to your catalog of great works! Well done
Ella Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 9:09 PM
Thank you Budgie :) I had help! Duir is an inspiration and a good teacher too! I thought to lighten the subject with the picture <3
Wolf Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Haha, that pic
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