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If You Love Something, Let It Go by IceyCheese on DeviantArt

Quote by Richard Bach, B. 1936- American Writer

Premiere Contest WinnerLetting Go

When father died I held onto his cold dead hand, then, I let father go to Heaven with an embrace; though, I knew with me his spirit would always stand, I did not want to ever, ever release him. When mother died I held her tightly to my heart, then, I let mother go to Heaven with an embrace; though, I knew in my life she would always be part, I did not want to ever, ever release her. When grandma- my inspiration- died my soul shattered, then, I let grandma go to Heaven with an embrace; she said write- and I let my poems be scattered, I did not want to ever, ever release her. When my child died without even seeing the sky, I let baby go to Heaven with an embrace; when my true love left, I stood at his grave weeping why, I did not want to ever, ever release him. When each pet cat went down that rainbow road, I let them go to Heaven with an embrace; and though I knew that they had been from God borrowed, I did not want to ever, ever release them. "Find peace for the dead embrace you still though they dwell above; oh, it is never easy in this life to let go and release love." ___________________ May 1, 2021 Added after contest finalized- Poetry/Rhyme/Letting Go Copyright Protected, ID 05-1350-802-01 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Embrace and Release sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 05/13/2021 First Place
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Kulkarni Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Words of wisdom expressed very creatively!! A great reminder of our impermanence! Congratulations Constance!
La France Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 7:27 AM
Smita, thank you for the comment and congratulations, peace _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative/beautiful story/write. "Amazing" Love it and the picture. I understand. Life is very hard. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
La France Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 7:53 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and compliment and for the great comment, love _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Constance, congratulations on your first place win. Wonderful description of the embrace and release of people and animals who are so precious to us. Sending you blessings.
La France Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Sam, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment, love _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 8:39 AM
A very well deserved TROPHY win. Congrats, Dear Heart.
La France Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 11:41 AM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congrats, love _Constance
Brul Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 2:51 AM
This is a masterpiece! Each stanza shares a sad story that embraces the heart and releases sublime inspiration. This is a fave for me..Congratulations on your trophy win!
La France Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 8:10 AM
JCB, thank you for the compliment, congratulations and the FAV, writing sad has become my forte, love _Constance
Alex Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 10:18 PM
Congratulations!
La France Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the congratulations, peace _Constance
Seeker Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 10:13 PM
Thank you so much for participating and sharing your inspirational poem, congrats on your top placement, Constance! Perfect!
La France Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Seeker, thank you for the inspiration, the contest and for my great placement, I am over the moon happy, and thanks for the compliment too, peace _Constance
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:58 PM
A beautiful poem in which you have shared your deepest emotions! you have used the words so effectively to convey pathos! all the best in the contest!
La France Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 7:25 AM
Krish, thank you for the visit and for the wonderful comment, peace _Constance
Nnoli Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 2:02 PM
This is beautiful , touching to my person , yes if you love something let it go, love is deep, love is a spiritual thing, great poem, thank you la France
La France Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Richard, thank you for the compliment and comment, peace _Constance
Theraven Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 5:38 PM
_Constance, Letting go you called your poem. Beautiful words inscribed left an indelible mark in an embrace, and in a lasting heart. -Richard
La France Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Richard, thank you for the visit and great comment, appreciate, serenity _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Lovely write for the contest. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
La France Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Gina, thank you so much for the compliment and love, serenity _Constance
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