Letter To My Jailor

-The Jailor-

a light darken 
jailbird misery
What does freedom feel like?



SKAT
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 3:12 PM
It's a Tale of a Witch - Modern Day, the poem you said you wanted to read of mine. from Aug 8, 2014: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/tale_of_a_witch___modern_day_591922
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May 27, 2015 at 6:49 PM
.. This poem needs work, sorry for the rude interruption, I will make changes during the summer, if you want to lend a hand please send soup mail to my inbox, I was beginner when I posted this poem..... HUGS SKAT. ...
Callus Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 7:34 AM
This is deep and sad, Skat. Hope that by now you know what freedom feels like! Have a lovely weekend. hugs // paul
Dunn Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 4:58 PM
Dear Skat, What a sad write my dearest friend, I hope you have found freedom scense writing this poem, by the way no one can put Iron bars within your mind, they may try but we are the inspired will never give up this venue of our inner imagination, cheri
Davis Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:31 AM
SKAT This is deep and powerful. A strong message in so few words. Nicely done. Thanks for the congrats on my Marriage poem.
Bordner Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 2:37 AM
A last chance, the best dance from an unrelenting performance, Freedom, new born, unconcerned consequence, strength in a Faith. Neat symbolism Skat. J.A.B.
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 7:10 PM
thanks for my win in your fairy contest> it was a sweet theme.
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July 7, 2013 at 12:07 AM
yes! :-)
Horne Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 4:23 PM
powerful write, my friend x
Conley Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 9:01 AM
Love it
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April 26, 2012 at 4:46 AM
always loved your poetry SKAT. harry
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April 25, 2012 at 11:14 AM
xoxoox to all
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May 28, 2011 at 8:02 AM
I really like this poem. oldie but goodie huh> ~JSLambert
Knop Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Excellent write, SKAT! Thank you for your kind comments and have a great weekend! Enjoyed reading your poem...Gert
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April 25, 2010 at 5:08 PM
and also, I wish you a wonderful Sunday as well, i hope something, a dream, memory, or even a thought will lift your spirit even for a little while.take care. -Always&Forever Lynette
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April 25, 2010 at 5:04 PM
You don't like thunder? i have to say im the same.more so when your depressed, somehow the sound of the thunder will make you feel worse.black rain, it sounds like a sudden change in your life one day, when your heart falls deeper than the depths of the black hole it's falling from.it's strange how you can still move that day, even though you are numb, it's only your body that keeps functioning.and the rest can't be spoken through words.that kind of depression from your poem is deep..-always
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 8:26 PM
Awesome, Irma. Love how you kept repeating black rain and the way you compared things like hurt as deep as a lake, This one flows very well. YOu have a distinct style, as I always say, I love people who are quirky or unique. LUv, Andrea
Palli Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 6:31 AM
can feel the regret
Trevino Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 5:41 PM
wow irma... that has sort of a lyric feel to it you should turn it into a song... enjoy your poetry
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