Letter To My Ex

Love, is it possible?
when heart is unable
to speak and to feel
whether us is for real

Trust, faith were torn apart
left me behind, so dark
is it my fault or yours?
blame myself, yes of course

I cannot give you all
dream house, cars, can't afford
Home is enough to live
Walk together indeed

I can't buy jewelry
'cause I gain less money
Wish you understand me
this is reality

Free my heart from hatred
He's the one you've chosen
handsome, and no doubt, rich!
I am down, and low pitch

Hope that he will love you
I don't want you to sob
although my wealth is few
but you felt true love

Be happy and be still
live your whole life with him!
and continue our dreams
That's the last I can give

Lost, but finding my way
got a few words to say
I love you and goodbye
keep this letter. . don't cry . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 1/15/2016 9:06:00 PM
Jeriel, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 6/8/2014 2:19:00 PM
your welcome...Linda
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Date: 6/5/2014 7:54:00 AM
Wow, the ending was not expected. Jeriel, if love could handle such let go's. ..amazing write. .Linda
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Jeriel Del Rosario
Date: 6/6/2014 9:15:00 AM
thanks Linda :) :)
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