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Letter To a Lover

I am writing to you now Because my voice is weak I have so much to say but for unknown reasons I cannot speak I have it down on paper How I feel about you Here, take this, read it I hope you feel the same way too. ---- I want to be the electrical current Surging through your nerves A drug induced stimulant It's your body I want served To take your body, Infiltrate your mind I asked god for a helping hand I believe you're his sign I wish that you could see me In the way that I see you now Like the way a king feels Upon receiving his crown Like total amazement, the thrill of The rapid waters white The pure joy of a blind man If given back his sight .....:JP) Jared Pickett

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/18/2010 10:38:00 AM
This is elegant and poignant, bravo!
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Date: 9/5/2009 7:39:00 PM
"The pure joy of a blind man If given back his sight" love this line, left you some soup mail...Raul
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Date: 8/4/2009 11:36:00 AM
Beautiful Bro. Everything you write is so powerful! You keep writing and I'll keep reading. Peace.
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Date: 7/28/2009 2:17:00 PM
Great write Jared, God bless, Moses
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Date: 7/28/2009 12:14:00 PM
Beatifully written... and I love the story theme you have going here. Enjoy your day... and don't forget to check out my new poem... The Soul :) enjoy your day.
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Date: 7/27/2009 10:20:00 AM
Very powerful Jared. Great expressions, I love the last two lines, Thanl You Bill
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Date: 7/27/2009 12:04:00 AM
beautiful love letter--great work--charma
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Date: 7/26/2009 11:08:00 AM
Excellent write Jared>>James
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Date: 7/26/2009 7:52:00 AM
beautiful poem, it speaks of great love and longing... well done
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