Letter To a '" Gentle Man " ( Repost )

He was quiet, and so very shy
His Loving " Poetry " , caught my eye

I felt his Tender Heart, flutter for me
I saw his Loving Heart ; Pen POETRY

Beautiful POETRY, and " I "  “The wonder of his words”
My Heart entwines with his, Everlasting LOVE : Endures

Throughout the Eons of Forever I have watched his sadness
My Beloved, Your Eternal Love Always brings my Heart Gladness

You sit beside me, at the Never ending banqueting  tables of Heaven
Alas : do not waste Your Love, waiting to be with me in Eden’s Garden

I see in the window of Your Heart, the mirror of Your Soul
The image in Your eyes, " Barbara Jean " and YOU Picnic on a California Knoll

The fond memories of Your breath, caressing my breast,  are now Hers
My Spirit smiles at Your happiness : Love Her as You do me
My Heart elated to see You Love again , long lost Emotions stir :
Barbara Jean , Take care of and Love  this “Gentle Man” for all Eternity
Bring Joy to his Life again , and to me Satisfaction that He "is" LOVED again

Inspired by Nathan Dilts’ Contest “ The Opposite Sex”
Dedicated to  " Barbara Jean " ; By " Lenore Ellen "
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/24/2010 6:09:00 AM
very confusing at first. john
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:31:00 PM
Hearfelt as all your writing is, my friend. Say, where is this series you wanted me to check out. I bet I did it for you a long time ago. But if you can tell me the page it's on, I can check to be sure .Thanks for your support. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/20/2010 6:26:00 AM
What a beautiful write, sometimes those that passed on gives their blessing to new found love it the most strangest of ways.. Enjoyed this a lot.. ;) All the best with the treatment of your eyes as well.. Love Wilma
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Date: 11/19/2010 9:49:00 PM
a beautiful and heartwarming piece for sure a treasure to be remembered and read again and again, this will go to my favorites definitely for sure for a poetic treasure,,wonderfully written and expressed,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 11/18/2010 4:13:00 PM
I haven't even seen this contest yet, but I know you put your heart into this write, HG. Very nice! Best wishes in Nate's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/18/2010 8:11:00 AM
SOUP MAIl .. to my silent beau from his forever "Sweetheart"...with luv..
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Date: 11/17/2010 11:48:00 PM
Harry, you never stop surprising me...I am speechless..more later..BG
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Date: 11/17/2010 8:21:00 PM
Such a wonderfully written poem HG my silent beau.. would have won for sure .. a great dedication to a lovely and talented poetess BG.. romantic men are the very best.. and u fit that bill luv.. "Sweetheart" forever and always luv..
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