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Nov.6.2023
Labrynthine, Languish, Letter Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France

“Even after our corporeal form leaves, a letter speaks to us in a language so intimate, conveying pent up emotions so personalized that one cannot express through spoken words without causing embarrassment to the one thus divulging” ~ By Poet It was like a cunning marauder, That cancer sneaked into his healthy body. After the initial shock, John got over it. Then ensued a brave fight to restrict its advance. But it ravaged his body inch by inch. Stage four cancer took residency in his bones. After thirteen months of incessant struggle His invincible life came to a peaceful halt! At the end of his funeral rites, his best friend Showed himself up before the congregation. In halting voice, he said he was on a task, To read out a letter John had prepared. Long before his death but had kept sealed until then. Opening an envelope, with wavering hands Like an envoy divinely ordained on a sacred mission He took out the carefully folded sheets of paper. The subdued murmur inside the spacious hall Gave way to silent breathless anticipation. 'My dearest family and friends' the words ran, 'Long at last, I am at peace, absolutely at peace, With no emails to check, no bills to pay, No more deadlines to be worried over! But unfortunately, no charming females in sight'' The words breathed his flamboyant humour, With his trademark grace and copious dignity. He led the audience through his life under death sentence. He was thankful for the love and concern, His friends and family had so profusely lavished on, In his ailing days of agony and dejection. That exceeded far more than what an ordinary man, In the whole of his lifetime could accumulate! The last part was a pronouncement of love, On his beloved wife and his wonderful child, Who stood by him in silent suffering by proxy, With a plea to all to keep peace with one's soul. Despite life's sham, drudgery, and shattered dreams! The congregation silently dispersed, walking away, Into a day of sunshine, greatly consoled and inspired!

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Date: 11/10/2023 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! Your "Letter" is a wonderful story/write/ending. Have a great day............
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Date: 11/9/2023 6:40:00 PM
My dearest Valsa, words cant relay the wonder I felt as I read every word of this precious poem. It is absolutely perfect in every way. You are a marvelous poet. SV
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Date: 11/9/2023 9:14:00 AM
- A touching story you tell ... beautifully and sensitively, Valsa - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 11/6/2023 3:32:00 PM
you poetically told a rather poignant, sad tale so beautifully. I was thoroughly engaged in each word and line. I was moved to gentle tears but was uplifted and consoled. You've artistically painted a picture of such a strong and endearing soul. Cancer is such a treacherous, inhumane disease. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story. Am faving. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/6/2023 3:32:00 PM
you poetically told a rather poignant, sad tale so beautifully. I was thoroughly engaged in each word and line. I was moved to gentle tears but was uplifted and consoled. You've artistically painted a picture of such a strong and endearing soul. Cancer is such a treacherous, inhumane disease. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story. Am faving. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/6/2023 2:27:00 PM
You possess an exceptional talent for storytelling! How your narrative flows is nothing short of exquisite. You have shared a poignant tale with us, delivering it movingly. I extend my condolences for your loss. While we find solace in our unwavering faith in God's ability to rectify all, even a brief separation becomes acutely painful when a beloved individual departs to join the celestial beings. I hope that you were able to find solace and moments of respite during your journey.
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Date: 11/6/2023 9:41:00 AM
Ah wow you are truly a brilliant storyteller! The way this flows is just beautiful! A touching story you’ve told us in a very moving manner. And how you’ve used the prompt letter is also very creative, i really didnt expect that, reading this write made me want to read more of your narratives, i can see a very artistic and deep storyteller through your words! I wish C didnt exist, so many suffer and this character seems to have a very charismatic and pleasant personality! I felt this one. BOL
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Date: 11/6/2023 7:29:00 AM
Hi Valsa; sorry for your lose. We endure, for faith in God to make all turn out right, but even brief parting is painful when someone so precious to heart has freshly gone to be with the Angels. My consoling prayers are with you and your grieving congregation. Blessings.
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