Letsby Avenue

The leaves rustle still in Letsby Avenue
Though how they do, no-one I know ever knew
Nobody crosses it, no-one walks through 
And nobody lives there and never will do

Curtains hang limp for they’re torn and tattered
And pigeons now coo from where windows are shattered
Only young thugs will go anywhere near
Until the breeze calls, ‘Let’s be ’aving you... Dear.’

And only the one made it back home alive
Young Jake Malone did his best to survive
He told his tale once and then no more would speak
And one day they found him face down in the creek

The men with the dozers, they don’t come no more
They came in the nineties and three times before
Those long rusted dozers remain in the street
Left when their drivers took off on their feet

Men died where they fell while attempting to flee
Necks broken akin to a fall from a tree
So no houses fell to make way for the new
The leaves rustle still in Letsby Avenue

Long time ago in nineteen-O-one
Young Tyler Letsby would climb trees for fun
His mom called him down, Let’s be aving you... Dear
The fall broke his neck and she buried him here

The leaves rustle still in Letsby Avenue
Though how they do, no-one I know ever knew
For no trees now grow in that bleak avenue
Since the axe took them down in nineteen-O-two




28 August 2021
Contest: The Avenue
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Laurie Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 4:28 PM
Hello Terry ... fine tale indeed; handed down through the generations I dare say to keep this ghostly event alive - thank you Terry - Lindsay
Flood Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 3:33 AM
Thanks Lindsay. Not remotely like the gag I intended to write. It took a more sinister turn but I kinda liked it. Terry
Leffanta Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 11:11 AM
Enjoyed, but didn't the Beatles sing, "Let it be"?
Flood Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Was that the song where the next line was,‘or it will fall off’? Glad you enjoyed, Rico. Terry
Fenn Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:04 PM
How sad...and haunting! Well written, Terry.
Flood Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. Terry
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August 28, 2021 at 7:51 PM
Terry, this is an incredibly fine poem. It has a sadness and a poignancy rarely found in this kind of rhyme. I will be thinking about Letsby street for a long, long time. This is worthy of POTD or POTW, IMHO.
Flood Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Thank you, Milt. Not written much for a week or so as I’m entrenched in other stuff. Felt the need to write something... intended it to be light-hearted... that went well... not! ;-) Terry
Wolf Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Great contest entry, Terry!... I keep trying to figure out, What's the 'hidden meaning' of 'Letsby.' I keep getting stonewalled at 'Gatsby.' Oh, well. ~ Jay
Flood Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 11:49 PM
No hidden meaning except that the pen is mightier than the mind. There’s an old gag in the uk which asks, ‘Where do policemen live?’. The answer is ‘Let’s be Avenue’. I started out intended to poetise this gag but the words that appeared on my screen went in this entirely different direction. Glad you liked it, Gershon. Terry
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