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Letsby Avenue

The leaves rustle still in Letsby Avenue Though how they do, no-one I know ever knew Nobody crosses it, no-one walks through And nobody lives there and never will do Curtains hang limp for they’re torn and tattered And pigeons now coo from where windows are shattered Only young thugs will go anywhere near Until the breeze calls, ‘Let’s be ’aving you... Dear.’ And only the one made it back home alive Young Jake Malone did his best to survive He told his tale once and then no more would speak And one day they found him face down in the creek The men with the dozers, they don’t come no more They came in the nineties and three times before Those long rusted dozers remain in the street Left when their drivers took off on their feet Men died where they fell while attempting to flee Necks broken akin to a fall from a tree So no houses fell to make way for the new The leaves rustle still in Letsby Avenue Long time ago in nineteen-O-one Young Tyler Letsby would climb trees for fun His mom called him down, Let’s be aving you... Dear The fall broke his neck and she buried him here The leaves rustle still in Letsby Avenue Though how they do, no-one I know ever knew For no trees now grow in that bleak avenue Since the axe took them down in nineteen-O-two 28 August 2021 Contest: The Avenue Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 9/9/2021 4:28:00 PM
Hello Terry ... fine tale indeed; handed down through the generations I dare say to keep this ghostly event alive - thank you Terry - Lindsay
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/11/2021 3:33:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay. Not remotely like the gag I intended to write. It took a more sinister turn but I kinda liked it. Terry
Date: 8/29/2021 11:11:00 AM
Enjoyed, but didn't the Beatles sing, "Let it be"?
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Date: 8/29/2021 12:00:00 PM
Was that the song where the next line was,‘or it will fall off’? Glad you enjoyed, Rico. Terry
Date: 8/28/2021 10:04:00 PM
How sad...and haunting! Well written, Terry.
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Date: 8/29/2021 12:01:00 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. Terry
Date: 8/28/2021 7:51:00 PM
Terry, this is an incredibly fine poem. It has a sadness and a poignancy rarely found in this kind of rhyme. I will be thinking about Letsby street for a long, long time. This is worthy of POTD or POTW, IMHO.
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Terry Flood
Date: 8/29/2021 2:16:00 PM
Thank you, Milt. Not written much for a week or so as I’m entrenched in other stuff. Felt the need to write something... intended it to be light-hearted... that went well... not! ;-) Terry
Date: 8/28/2021 7:33:00 PM
Great contest entry, Terry!... I keep trying to figure out, What's the 'hidden meaning' of 'Letsby.' I keep getting stonewalled at 'Gatsby.' Oh, well. ~ Jay
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Date: 8/28/2021 11:49:00 PM
No hidden meaning except that the pen is mightier than the mind. There’s an old gag in the uk which asks, ‘Where do policemen live?’. The answer is ‘Let’s be Avenue’. I started out intended to poetise this gag but the words that appeared on my screen went in this entirely different direction. Glad you liked it, Gershon. Terry

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