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Let's Rhyme

For the Let's Rhyme Contest Shadow Hamilton Placed 2nd Across the field, covered in white Stood a gray barn, closed for the night Still as the snowy pines, in sight That towered tall, with all their might A soundless landscape full of light From sparkling snowflakes, shining bright Brought peace that took my soul in flight I flew higher, by my own right It was an evening, pure delight Without burdens, nothing to fight Now it was time, to rest in firelight To bask in warmth, with gained foresight A soft impression, but not slight A barn in this field of insight Heidi Sands 12/6/23

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Jay Narain

Date: 12/13/2023 9:54:00 AM

Great pom. Congrats on win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/13/2023 11:00:00 AM

Thank you Jay. I appreciate your comment :)

Karen Jones

Date: 12/13/2023 12:14:00 AM

This is exceptional. Love it. Congrats on a win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/13/2023 6:17:00 AM

Thank you very much Karen :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/12/2023 4:44:00 AM

congrts on 2nd place Heidi a lovely poem hugs Shadow

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2023 5:45:00 AM

Thank you very much. I hope you have a nice day :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2023 8:37:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your creative lines. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2023 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Sara. I am happy you enjoyed it and I appreciate your support. I hope you have a nice evening :)