Heidi Sands Poet Monorhyme

Let's Rhyme

For the Let's Rhyme Contest
Shadow Hamilton
Placed 2nd

Across the field,  covered in white
Stood a gray barn, closed for the night
Still as the snowy pines, in sight
That towered tall, with all their might

A soundless landscape full of light
From sparkling snowflakes, shining bright
Brought peace that took my soul in flight
I flew higher, by my own right

It was an evening, pure delight
Without burdens, nothing to fight
Now it was time, to rest in firelight
To bask in warmth, with gained foresight

A soft impression, but not slight
A barn in this field of insight

Heidi Sands

12/6/23

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Jay Narain December 13, 2023 at 9:54 AM Great pom. Congrats on win. Heidi Sands December 13, 2023 at 11:00 AM Thank you Jay. I appreciate your comment :)

Karen Jones December 13, 2023 at 12:14 AM This is exceptional. Love it. Congrats on a win. Heidi Sands December 13, 2023 at 6:17 AM Thank you very much Karen :)

Shadow Hamilton December 12, 2023 at 4:44 AM congrts on 2nd place Heidi a lovely poem hugs Shadow Heidi Sands December 12, 2023 at 5:45 AM Thank you very much. I hope you have a nice day :)

Sara Kendrick December 10, 2023 at 8:37 AM Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your creative lines. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K Heidi Sands December 10, 2023 at 1:49 PM Thank you Sara. I am happy you enjoyed it and I appreciate your support. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Joseph May December 7, 2023 at 1:53 PM Beautiful write Heidi, I enjoyed the read Heidi Sands December 7, 2023 at 2:11 PM Thank you very much Joseph. I am happy you enjoyed this :)

Silent One December 7, 2023 at 8:18 AM Great monorhymes Heidi, these flow and rhyme so well.. best of luck in the contest.. Heidi Sands December 7, 2023 at 8:45 AM Thank you Silent One. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit December 7, 2023 at 6:32 AM Delightful imagery in this poem, Heidi. Splendid monorhymes enhance your theme, my friend. Heidi Sands December 7, 2023 at 7:11 AM Thank you Vijay. I took a photo of this scene that I wrote about. But , haven't added photo here yet. I appreciate your kind feedback :)

Jerry Brotherton December 6, 2023 at 6:56 PM Such a lovely poem Heidi. A soundless landscape of white. Have a wonderful day, my friend. Heidi Sands December 7, 2023 at 5:11 AM Thank you very much Jerry.. I hope you have a nice day too :)

Kim Rodrigues December 6, 2023 at 6:37 PM Beautiful! Heidi Sands December 7, 2023 at 5:11 AM Thank you Kim :)

Judy Ball December 6, 2023 at 4:02 PM Lovely Heidi. A very peaceful feel to this. Nicely done. God Bless, JB Heidi Sands December 6, 2023 at 4:18 PM Thank you Judy. I took a photo of this today and it does look peaceful . I hope you have a nice evening :)

Daniel Turner December 6, 2023 at 2:56 PM very nice, Heidi. I enjoyed the evening view:) Heidi Sands December 6, 2023 at 3:19 PM Thank you DT! I am happy you enjoyed this :)