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Lets Make It Dark

we visited-
brandenburg gate and   charlottenburg palace
   oh so lovely
we prayed on our knees at the berlin cathedral
saw all the museums there are to see
I wept at the berlin wall
but darling, lets go back, lets hurry
To das stue hotel and close the curtains
lets make it    dark
and have an afternoon    of passion
instead of drinking coffee in the cafes of berlin

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January 17, 2016

Poetry/Free Verse/lets make it dark
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Funom Makama Date: 1/19/2016 8:42:00 AM Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7 Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/19/2016 6:21:00 PM Funom, thanks for the beautiful and the 7 !

James Inman Date: 1/18/2016 3:07:00 PM What an invitation, never liked coffee that much anyway. Great write, BW. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/18/2016 6:42:00 PM James, your so funny, yeah lets skip the coffee, thanks for visiting ~

Justin Bordner Date: 1/18/2016 1:56:00 AM Yes, let us drink the the purple love of gothic bound passion Poetess...Mmmmmm.....so very romantic, and urgently, lovely dark...your use of word spacing is very sensuous to me, and your intimate references to Germany's wonders is so arousing my Wings of Fire...J.A.B. I must FAV! this special poem... Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/18/2016 6:51:00 AM Justin, thank you so much, what a perfectly divine comment, oh lovely is the fav !

Jan Allison Date: 1/17/2016 1:26:00 PM ha ha I love the humourous aspect of your poem Broken Wings lol:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/17/2016 2:54:00 PM Jan, thanks for seeing the fun part or shoud I say the passion in this poem, lol !

Duke Beaufort Date: 1/17/2016 11:59:00 AM Just too funny. We don't get to see this kind of expression very often. Passion is not a bad thing. You are just too sweet! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/17/2016 2:55:00 PM Duke, thanks for visiting, always a delight, happy you saw the humour and the passion and thanks for the sweet ~

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/17/2016 9:00:00 AM so moving, constance.. your images have that sweet melancholic feel.. huggs Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/17/2016 9:49:00 AM Nette thanks for the nice comment and for the hugs , appreciate ~

Miraj Raha Date: 1/17/2016 8:57:00 AM nice idea,Broken wings. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/17/2016 9:50:00 AM Miraj, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~