Constance La France Poet Free verse

Lets Make It Dark

we visited-
brandenburg gate and   charlottenburg palace
   oh so lovely
we prayed on our knees at the berlin cathedral
saw all the museums there are to see
I wept at the berlin wall
but darling, lets go back, lets hurry
To das stue hotel and close the curtains
lets make it    dark
and have an afternoon    of passion
instead of drinking coffee in the cafes of berlin

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January 17, 2016

Poetry/Free Verse/lets make it dark
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All Rights Reserved, 2016, Constance La France

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Funom Makama January 19, 2016 at 8:42 AM Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7 Constance La France January 19, 2016 at 6:21 PM Funom, thanks for the beautiful and the 7 !

James Inman January 18, 2016 at 3:07 PM What an invitation, never liked coffee that much anyway. Great write, BW. Constance La France January 18, 2016 at 6:42 PM James, your so funny, yeah lets skip the coffee, thanks for visiting ~

Justin Bordner January 18, 2016 at 1:56 AM Yes, let us drink the the purple love of gothic bound passion Poetess...Mmmmmm.....so very romantic, and urgently, lovely dark...your use of word spacing is very sensuous to me, and your intimate references to Germany's wonders is so arousing my Wings of Fire...J.A.B. I must FAV! this special poem... Constance La France January 18, 2016 at 6:51 AM Justin, thank you so much, what a perfectly divine comment, oh lovely is the fav !

Jan Allison January 17, 2016 at 1:26 PM ha ha I love the humourous aspect of your poem Broken Wings lol:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France January 17, 2016 at 2:54 PM Jan, thanks for seeing the fun part or shoud I say the passion in this poem, lol !

Duke Beaufort January 17, 2016 at 11:59 AM Just too funny. We don't get to see this kind of expression very often. Passion is not a bad thing. You are just too sweet! Constance La France January 17, 2016 at 2:55 PM Duke, thanks for visiting, always a delight, happy you saw the humour and the passion and thanks for the sweet ~

Nette Onclaud January 17, 2016 at 9:00 AM so moving, constance.. your images have that sweet melancholic feel.. huggs Constance La France January 17, 2016 at 9:49 AM Nette thanks for the nice comment and for the hugs , appreciate ~

Miraj Raha January 17, 2016 at 8:57 AM nice idea,Broken wings. Constance La France January 17, 2016 at 9:50 AM Miraj, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~