Get Your Premium Membership

Lets Heal Our Hearts With Love Anew

Lets Heal Our Hearts With Love Anew (Echo Sonnet, number 4) Darling, please heal again this broken heart, once our hands sought each other's soft touch; when our nights found no dancing was too much. Always you and I from that kissing start. Can we find sweet true love and never part? Fly upon white snow covered mountain tops; move heaven and earth, pray it never stops! Always you and I from that kissing start. Next consult our love's astrology chart? Discover new moans in our night's hot bed; As we forget those love hurts in our heads. Always you and I from that kissing start. Darling, please heal again this broken heart Always you and I from that kissing start. Robert J. Lindley, 2 -15-2016 Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Debbie's 6/6/6 Sonnet challenge -Number 4 SONNET FORM #4 Echo Sonnet a*bbA accA addA a*A. a*, a and A lines all rhyme and a* and A lines are the repeating lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment
Date: 2/26/2016 7:10:00 PM
Wonderful! The flow, the "music," the imagery, and most of all, the message. Positively first rate, Robert.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/24/2016 12:04:00 AM
Robert what a beautiful romantic Sonnet, they are my favourite form of poetry, love it, hope you and Riza are well, take care..........Vera
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2016 3:02:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Robert. Sure to be on the winners list. Elaine
Login to Reply