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Let's Go Sailing


It is my greatest pleasure to be alone
To hear again the grey gulls guttural song.
My double sails are filled with gusty strong wind.
So good to feel heaven's peace far from mankind.

The shore is well far away but safely so,
Especially since now the strong wind blows slow.
Around the boat so many diverse fish swim,
Afraid of their destiny that can be grim.

Are they afraid of the dolphins jumping high
Up in foamy sea, they jump towards the sky.
But far, far away the reddish sun goes down
All neon lights are now bright in the small town .

Fiddle with the turn-and-bank indicator.
I return home alone, eat and sleep later.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 9:46 AM
I enjoyed sailing with you today safely from my living room or am I safe? I do enjoy seeing what fish are in the water of the sea or ocean but also in fresh water as well. The diversity is so rich and interesting. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K
George Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:31 PM
Enjoyed your pleasant boating across the tranquil waters, hearing the gutteral songs of sea gulls.... ! You have created a lovely ambiance !
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 12:25 PM
- Sounds like a nice trip on the ocean ... I would like to see the dolphins ... thanks for the trip ... I enjoy it, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 3:22 AM
Ahhh... at times to be alone is just what I need and I so enjoyed my trip on the boat Victor. It really felt I was on the sea as your words took me on that special journey - thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Ball Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Beautifully written Victor. Such a peaceful piece. I can see you in your boat sailing on the peaceful waters. Watching gulls fly and fish swim by. Love it. God Bless, JB
Skelly Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 2:23 AM
Atmospheric ocean poem..nicely done...Delice
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 3:28 AM
There are times when I enjoy sharing natures sights and sounds with others, but more often we see and hear much better when we're alone with our own thoughts. A sweet write, Victor.
Buehler Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 10:49 AM
The peace and serenity found in nature is unmatched. Everyone needs a getaway sometimes. Your gorgeous sonnet describes the ideal setting, Victor. Blessings. :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Being alone is very nice, especially for us introverts. This seems like a very nice way to do it!
Lawrence Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Victor, The whispers of your heart and soul are palpable here. Beautifully expressed images and emotions . The ocean is one of the best places to feel this merging with Mother Nature . Loved it …. Blessings, Susan :)
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Sprinkled Serenity through your words..I could picture it all..So glad to read your poems again.Hope you're fine.
May Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 7:34 AM
"Feeling heaven's peace far from mankind", Beautiful write Victor
Poet Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 7:16 AM
As always, Victor, your images capture the essence of the scenes perfectly. There is nothing better than taking a boat tour on the sea. You had a great time traveling through the sea, taking in the sights and sounds.
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Enjoyed the journey, amid sights and sounds of the sea, Victor. Excellent images paint the scenes, as always.
Daniel Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 4:46 AM
Sailing sounds good, Victor, I have never experienced it, but you make it sound alluring:)
Horsman Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 2:27 AM
So sad the loneliness, Victor, solitude is nice, especially in a boat without a care, where the world seem so far away. Great poem.
Seeker Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 1:38 AM
Soothing quietude
Cunningham Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 1:12 AM
Nothing more relaxing than a day on the sea Victor. Tom
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