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Let's Be In a Relationship

So you can crush my hopes

Destroy my dreams

Puncture my heart

Murder my self esteem

Vaporize my personal confidence

Humiliate my ego

While throwing me into an abyss of self doubt

On the bright side

You will give me plenty of new material

To write about

I guess I should be in a relationship more often

I guess this is the life of a writer




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Edward Ebbs

Date: 10/22/2011 7:59:00 AM

Wow, good job my friend. When I started to write, coherent or not, it was a release to find balance...there in an old saying that when you are going through hell, don't stop, just keep on going!