Let Us Paint Stars In the Heavens-So

Let Us Paint Stars in the Heavens



But first, you must come and carry me in your arms.
For human utterances, nothing to me, do they convey,
Simpy,  the raw, bare, nakedness of us, sets me aflame!
Reflecting our stunning sexuality in that flowered pool, 
next to Mount Olympus.
Where Pan, happily, his flute doth gayly, play.
In our Grecian land, where we have so many times have lain.

On God's verdant carpet of grass, Grecian gardenia mixed 
with your manly scent.
May my last breath be only a swooming sea!
That is the very human scent of only desirable you and the
ever most wanton me.

How shy was I, that very first time, swept away by the site 
of your haunting rippling flesh!
Embarrassed, oh yes, I wanted to look away!
But swooned at your virile manhood, nonetheless.
Captured was I, a total, forever, a prisoner of you!

Nothing innocent about us shall ever be written.
And yes, I wish it just to be exactly so!
For we are blessed to be passions' slaves in full glory.
We paint the stars in heaven without shame and no 
faux romantic story!

A tale of us, most rare and divine, unspeakably delirious.
Where I can always feel your eternal hands, traversing 
my naked spine.
I, your slave, till that final cloud takes me forever home.
To exist in the heavens, in our Orpheus star, never more lost, 
eternally....
Within you, my eternal, celestial home, no more to roam.


July 29,  2020

Entered in Silent One's Sensuality Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 2:13 PM
A brilliantly written and picturesque muse Panagiota. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
Romios Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 4:12 PM
Many thanks, Aditi~ and what a heavenly name you are blessed with. I was grateful to place in this Contest!! I rarely think of anything I write as brilliant. More mundane! I stepped outside myself to write this. That was the best part, Aditi! It felt like true creation. May our Muses beep our pens aglow. Panagiota xxxooo
Gilmour Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 12:01 PM
The picture you have painted is truly a Grecian masterpiece (as James said) exquisite Panagiota and many congratulations for your winning place in the contest. You are so full of passion and love my friend for this is stunningly beautiful. Thank you and sending love & hugs to you and sweet Irene ^¥^ XXXXOOOOXXXXOOO
Romios Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 12:53 PM
You really are wonderfully nice to comment on another of my personal Faves, I wasn't sure how this would work in the Contest~ but guess it did!! Irene sends hugs as do I. Panagiota the Passionate xxxxxooooo + ^oo^
Lindley Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 9:14 PM
Huge congratulations on your win my dear friend! Your brilliant gem deserved it.. God bless...
Romios Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 9:18 PM
Thank you Robert. The more I read it, the more I like it. Finally willing to admit I am a good poet. Thank you, dear friend. Panagiota xoxo
Fraser Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 12:30 PM
It's as if someone had found a Grecian Masterpiece written by a past poet. A delight to read, as the reader addresses their thoughts to beautiful loving images, mmm, a big congrats on your win, James :) x
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 12:56 PM
James! I curtsey and blush! What a phenomenal compliment..Thank you for your magnificent comparison. I didn't knw which form ti use. I just let this poem "happen" in and of itself. So glad you liked it.m James,,Panagiota xoxo
Cunningham Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 5:25 PM
Sigh of relief, I won't have to eat my hat lol. Knew it would do well, big congratulations. Tom
Romios Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Oh, my! I forgot I said that about the hat-)))You Certainly had more faith than I did. Nice to have a second place award! hugs.. Panagiota. Xoxo
One Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 4:57 PM
I can feel the Greek God and Goddess feel to this one... I can see who inspired this one... lol... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Romios Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 5:43 PM
What a wonderful placement, Silent One, thanks, I had to change the Star name. I usually use Romios Star....but use of my name might have disqualified me. Anyway, I am one, joyous poetess. OPA! Panagiota Romios xxx you are correct on who inspired it...{Sigh}
Mcintosh Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 8:56 AM
Hi. This is such a gem. Love it and you, Bless you, Gina
Romios Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Hello,Miss Gina! Wow! Thank you for calling this a gem. How very sweet. Aporeciate you and how you support others. Outstanding and both a good example and reminder to all --Panagiota xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 6:27 PM
Hello Panagiota, well done.I also think is is a winner. Enjoy your evening my friend. hHugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 12:22 PM
Hello Panagiota, Oh that is great Panagiota. I do think it is your favourite. I can n ot find Wisper In The Wind and Rivers of Life. Did you post them? Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo Have a nice day my friend.
Romios Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 11:36 PM
Hi Darlene! I don't want to antipate being a winner at all. It would be great, yes, yes. But this is one poem I truly do love. It satisfies my poetics soul Hugs, Panagiota xxxooo
Warrior Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 4:24 AM
Well crafted my friend...a winner in the court of the Wingster...poetic (((Hugs)))...^WW^ :o)
Romios Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 11:42 AM
Wingster! Happy to be a winner in your court, anytime! Thank you.. Your, Pangie xoxo
Lindley Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 12:08 AM
Sorry to be late to find this gleaming gem my friend. Such hot sensuality stirs emotions and makes me think of a youth that once chased romance with abandon. A definite fav,, God bless...
Romios Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Dearest Robert, to me you never need apologize! I am honored by all comments, late or new. Yes, we do recall the sexual salsa. Can't imagine sex sans salsa! How horribly boring. Merci, for a FAV, my friend. Blessings, Your Panagiota xx
Somadas Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 12:01 AM
We paint the stars in heaven without shame.. Beautiful romantic lines.. Great Entry Panagiota.. Good luck..
Romios Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 10:20 AM
Jenesh! Wow! I love your first sentence. It is a knockout that punches a hole through fake prudishness! Thank you. As I told Susan, wishing me luck with this entry is appreciated. Panagiota xx
Ashley Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 6:27 PM
I am enraptured with the passionate ecstasy that flowed so sensuously from your steamy, creative pen, Panagiota. Striking and fervent imagery! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan.
Romios Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Hello, Susan.! Thank you for the reply to my Soupmail-))! Your comment, is terrific. I am so glad you saw what I was trying to convey. Ecstasy is quite accurate. Also, I appreciate your wishes for a win. There are far more artistic poets than I here. Grateful to Silent for running this contest, he deserves credit for it, too.-)) Panagiota xx
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:09 PM
A sensual mythological romantic verse, your pen is on fire Panagiota, if this doesn't place I'll eat my hat. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Romios Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Better get mustard ready. LOL. Far better, more experienced pens here than mine. But love your compliment in any case. Thanks. Panagiota xx
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