Valsa George Poet Triolet

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August.1.2023

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Let Us Go For a Walk

After the rain, dawns a bright day
Let us go out without a care
Into the far woods, let us stray
After the rain, dawns a bright day,
Enjoy the palm trees on our way, 
See what scenes nature has to share 
After the rain, dawns a bright day
Let us go out without a care

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Linda Alice Fowler August 10, 2023 at 12:09 PM Back with big congrats dear Valsa! hugs! :)

Kim Merryman August 7, 2023 at 7:13 PM Valsa, your triolet paints a delightful and relaxing scene! congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Valsa George August 7, 2023 at 8:58 PM Thanks a lot Kim for the placement !

Gershon Wolf August 2, 2023 at 7:24 PM You really nailed this triolet, Valsa. It walks away a winner, I say! Smiles, Gershon

Linda Alice Fowler August 2, 2023 at 1:57 PM Fun stroll through nature Valsa. I love "Enjoy the palm trees on our way, See what scenes nature has to share." :)

Sotto Poet August 1, 2023 at 2:16 PM A delightful verse indeed. When the heavens release their watery bounty, the act of stepping outside becomes a source of sheer bliss for the very essence of one's being. I kindly request that you reevaluate the number of syllables in each line, for they ought to amount to a sum of eight. Valsa George August 1, 2023 at 7:38 PM Thanks for the lovely comment. Also for informing this. I wrote this without learning the rules. It has been very kind of you to have brought it to my notice. I shall modify....

Paula Goldsmith August 1, 2023 at 10:24 AM I enjoyed your rainy day write. We need rain. Have a great day and stay dry.............

Jay Narain August 1, 2023 at 10:02 AM Nice poem. After rain, venturing outdoors brings pleasure for soul.

Joanna Daniel August 1, 2023 at 1:45 AM Lovely, Valsa:)

Sara Kendrick August 1, 2023 at 1:36 AM You have chosen a very good line to be the main repeat line. hese are not so easy to write but you have done a good job. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Yann Rolland July 31, 2023 at 9:52 PM so charming poem, you give envy to walk in calm coutry, alone and quiet, thanks for bringing serenity