Let Us Go For a Walk

After the rain, dawns a bright day
Let us go out without a care
Into the far woods, let us stray
After the rain, dawns a bright day,
Enjoy the palm trees on our way, 
See what scenes nature has to share 
After the rain, dawns a bright day
Let us go out without a care

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/10/2023 12:09:00 PM

Back with big congrats dear Valsa! hugs! :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/7/2023 7:13:00 PM

Valsa, your triolet paints a delightful and relaxing scene! congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Valsa George
Date: 8/7/2023 8:58:00 PM

Thanks a lot Kim for the placement !

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/2/2023 7:24:00 PM

You really nailed this triolet, Valsa. It walks away a winner, I say! Smiles, Gershon

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/2/2023 1:57:00 PM

Fun stroll through nature Valsa. I love "Enjoy the palm trees on our way, See what scenes nature has to share." :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/1/2023 2:16:00 PM

A delightful verse indeed. When the heavens release their watery bounty, the act of stepping outside becomes a source of sheer bliss for the very essence of one's being. I kindly request that you reevaluate the number of syllables in each line, for they ought to amount to a sum of eight.

Valsa George
Date: 8/1/2023 7:38:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment. Also for informing this. I wrote this without learning the rules. It has been very kind of you to have brought it to my notice. I shall modify....

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/1/2023 10:24:00 AM

I enjoyed your rainy day write. We need rain. Have a great day and stay dry.............

Jay Narain

Date: 8/1/2023 10:02:00 AM

Nice poem. After rain, venturing outdoors brings pleasure for soul.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/1/2023 1:45:00 AM

Lovely, Valsa:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2023 1:36:00 AM

You have chosen a very good line to be the main repeat line. hese are not so easy to write but you have done a good job. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara