Let the Wind Be Your Eyes

You can hear the whispers of your soul as you stand quietly in tune with a vast universe. As you let the wind be your eyes, the birds your voice, as you listen with your heart as you smell the bark of trees. You are willingly exposed, naked like all life that frees itself of packaging,  you feel vegetation growing inside and outside of your flesh. Your spirit flows with the tide. Your roots grow down and out of the soft fertile side  of the moon. You rid yourself of the chains that bind you to preconceived notions which somehow you knew  had never really applied to anyone or anything. Now as vegetation you grow and you are flying towards the timeless clouds like wisps floating. The unbound sky calls your name as you pace outside earth's atmosphere to become the face  of a Galaxy. Stars live on your black hide, race the void of gravity, the void of unharnessed mass. You?  You are the void. Your intuition directs you, leads you finally releases you of the constraints of a restricted you. You can hear the whispers of your soul and you are you. 16~12~2014 Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle Contest Name: Whispers Of Your Soul

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Date: 1/13/2015 11:39:00 PM
such a nice poem, to be one with the universe and merge in it forever
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:57:00 PM
Maurice,, congratulations on your AWESOME win, LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2015 3:07:00 PM
Congratulation,Maurice, on your winning poem. Blessings & hugs to you my friend eve
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Date: 1/9/2015 2:58:00 PM
Hi Maurice, Very interesting and enjoyable to read. It has a nice cosmic touch too. Congratulations on your excellent poem and great win. Earl
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Date: 1/9/2015 11:10:00 AM
Congrats my friend,a good one you have here,I am happy this made this list...huggs
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Date: 1/9/2015 11:00:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Armand am delighted to read this again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2015 10:41:00 AM
Beautifully penned poem, Maurice, congrats on the win
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Date: 1/9/2015 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Maurice. I love the way you become one with nature in your poem...the only way to hear the whispers of one's soul. Sandra
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Date: 12/19/2014 9:26:00 AM
truly beautiful painting maurice excellent pen dear pal wishing you a great weekend
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Date: 12/17/2014 10:30:00 PM
Flowing like the wind Maurice... Well done
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Date: 12/17/2014 6:28:00 PM
Mauerice, Your a great fellow to write such a heart felt work, well done, cheri
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Date: 12/17/2014 9:09:00 AM
you are just brilliant, makes life seem so effortless .....Seren
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:48:00 AM
Whispers of wisdom your poem is mon ami, Mauerice! Good luck and a seven!
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:39:00 PM
The soul transcends from the organic to the inorganic and gently sings the secrets of self . . . sweet whispers my dear talented friend.
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:14:00 PM
OMG, this is absolutely one of your best. WAY to USE IMAGERY. Finally seeing one in this category that really makes me LOVE to read it. FAVE for sure.
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Date: 12/16/2014 6:19:00 PM
such powerful images here Maurice - the more you read it the deeper it is - I especially adore the final line( the rest of it isn't bad either) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 12/16/2014 5:13:00 PM
Wow, my friend I am impressed! You are a man of many talents and writing with such variety is one of them! :) :)
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