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Let the Moon Watch

Trespassing moonlight--
I envy its touch on  you
and light a candle,
let the moon watch from the sky
thousand moons' birth in our love




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Bernard Wachira Date: 11/6/2012 2:22:00 AM GREAT WRITE KASH Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 10/21/2012 4:19:00 PM This sounds romantic, in a very eastern way. Westerners do not usually think of the moon as birthing love. I really like the difference a few words can make. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/19/2012 1:36:00 PM Breathtaking and beautiful. You have such a romantic soul ! :) Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 10/18/2012 8:05:00 PM moonlight is beautiful, as is your tanka...love the hint of jealousy within the passion! Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 10/16/2012 9:40:00 PM a lot of romance here,,,,, very nice,,, blessings of the day to you ;} Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 10/16/2012 7:25:00 PM I love the last line on this Kash. Should count how many moons we have seen over the years. Ah shucks to many to count. Love your poem. love phyl Login to Reply

Tanya Harrington Date: 10/16/2012 1:11:00 PM Rich with romance. Wonderful. :) Tanya Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 10/16/2012 8:16:00 AM beautiful thought and a fine Tanka!! Jag Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/15/2012 2:12:00 AM kashi, i have watched your moon many times... gotta give me a new moon!..lol... looking forward..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 10/14/2012 4:18:00 AM Big congrats from Spain xx Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/13/2012 10:57:00 PM thumbs up, kashi.. missed ya, bud.. so many reunions this weekend... krinnng krinng!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 10/13/2012 10:09:00 PM Hi Kash, well done. Lovely tanka, Lee Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/13/2012 1:28:00 AM what the heck? I'm just finally gonna fave this one!!! Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 10/12/2012 11:18:00 PM very nice Tanka friend Kash :) congratulations!! **Maria** Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/12/2012 3:30:00 PM Ahhh! Romantic..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate your opinion..Sara Login to Reply

Goran Rahim Date: 10/12/2012 2:44:00 PM well penned tanka kash. thank you for stopping by my poem. well appriciated Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 10/12/2012 8:47:00 AM nicely penned ...congrats on your win Kash Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 10/12/2012 5:18:00 AM Exquisitely done Kash...second line is a knock-out...congrats on your win - Tim Login to Reply

Modupe Sefunmi Date: 10/12/2012 3:12:00 AM Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/12/2012 12:18:00 AM I adore this one!! Congratulations, Kashinath. Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 10/11/2012 11:10:00 PM Beautiful Kash, Many congrats on this win. Login to Reply Courtney Courtney Date: 10/12/2012 2:05:00 AM nice

Joyce Johnson Date: 10/11/2012 10:45:00 PM Very nice Kash. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Delilah Ventura Date: 10/11/2012 7:23:00 PM That was so sweet.... Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/11/2012 3:25:00 PM so romantic! gotta love all those moons!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/11/2012 12:40:00 PM A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

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