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Let the Moon Watch





Trespassing moonlight-- I envy its touch on you and light a candle, let the moon watch from the sky thousand moons' birth in our love © kash poet ===========000============

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/6/2012 2:22:00 AM
GREAT WRITE KASH
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Date: 10/21/2012 4:19:00 PM
This sounds romantic, in a very eastern way. Westerners do not usually think of the moon as birthing love. I really like the difference a few words can make.
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Date: 10/19/2012 1:36:00 PM
Breathtaking and beautiful. You have such a romantic soul ! :)
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:05:00 PM
moonlight is beautiful, as is your tanka...love the hint of jealousy within the passion!
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Date: 10/16/2012 9:40:00 PM
a lot of romance here,,,,, very nice,,, blessings of the day to you ;}
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Date: 10/16/2012 7:25:00 PM
I love the last line on this Kash. Should count how many moons we have seen over the years. Ah shucks to many to count. Love your poem. love phyl
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Date: 10/16/2012 1:11:00 PM
Rich with romance. Wonderful. :) Tanya
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Date: 10/16/2012 8:16:00 AM
beautiful thought and a fine Tanka!! Jag
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Date: 10/15/2012 2:12:00 AM
kashi, i have watched your moon many times... gotta give me a new moon!..lol... looking forward..:) huggs!
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Date: 10/14/2012 4:18:00 AM
Big congrats from Spain xx
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Date: 10/13/2012 10:57:00 PM
thumbs up, kashi.. missed ya, bud.. so many reunions this weekend... krinnng krinng!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/13/2012 10:09:00 PM
Hi Kash, well done. Lovely tanka, Lee
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Date: 10/13/2012 1:28:00 AM
what the heck? I'm just finally gonna fave this one!!!
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Date: 10/12/2012 11:18:00 PM
very nice Tanka friend Kash :) congratulations!! **Maria**
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Date: 10/12/2012 3:30:00 PM
Ahhh! Romantic..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate your opinion..Sara
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Date: 10/12/2012 2:44:00 PM
well penned tanka kash. thank you for stopping by my poem. well appriciated
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Date: 10/12/2012 8:47:00 AM
nicely penned ...congrats on your win Kash
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Date: 10/12/2012 5:18:00 AM
Exquisitely done Kash...second line is a knock-out...congrats on your win - Tim
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Date: 10/12/2012 3:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/12/2012 12:18:00 AM
I adore this one!! Congratulations, Kashinath.
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Date: 10/11/2012 11:10:00 PM
Beautiful Kash, Many congrats on this win.
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Date: 10/12/2012 2:05:00 AM
nice
Date: 10/11/2012 10:45:00 PM
Very nice Kash. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/11/2012 7:23:00 PM
That was so sweet....
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Date: 10/11/2012 3:25:00 PM
so romantic! gotta love all those moons!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/11/2012 12:40:00 PM
A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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