Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Let the Moon Watch

Trespassing moonlight--
I envy its touch on  you
and light a candle,
let the moon watch from the sky
thousand moons' birth in our love




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Bernard Wachira November 6, 2012 at 2:22 AM GREAT WRITE KASH

Joann Grisetti October 21, 2012 at 4:19 PM This sounds romantic, in a very eastern way. Westerners do not usually think of the moon as birthing love. I really like the difference a few words can make.

Carrie Richards October 19, 2012 at 1:36 PM Breathtaking and beautiful. You have such a romantic soul ! :)

Sandra Adams October 18, 2012 at 8:05 PM moonlight is beautiful, as is your tanka...love the hint of jealousy within the passion!

Debbie Duncan October 16, 2012 at 9:40 PM a lot of romance here,,,,, very nice,,, blessings of the day to you ;}

Phyllis Babcock October 16, 2012 at 7:25 PM I love the last line on this Kash. Should count how many moons we have seen over the years. Ah shucks to many to count. Love your poem. love phyl

Tanya Harrington October 16, 2012 at 1:11 PM Rich with romance. Wonderful. :) Tanya

S.Jagathsimhan Nair October 16, 2012 at 8:16 AM beautiful thought and a fine Tanka!! Jag

Nette Onclaud October 15, 2012 at 2:12 AM kashi, i have watched your moon many times... gotta give me a new moon!..lol... looking forward..:) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 14, 2012 at 4:18 AM Big congrats from Spain xx

Nette Onclaud October 13, 2012 at 10:57 PM thumbs up, kashi.. missed ya, bud.. so many reunions this weekend... krinnng krinng!..:) huggs

Lee Ramage October 13, 2012 at 10:09 PM Hi Kash, well done. Lovely tanka, Lee

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2012 at 1:28 AM what the heck? I'm just finally gonna fave this one!!!

Bukang Liwayway October 12, 2012 at 11:18 PM very nice Tanka friend Kash :) congratulations!! **Maria**

Sara Kendrick October 12, 2012 at 3:30 PM Ahhh! Romantic..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate your opinion..Sara

Goran Rahim October 12, 2012 at 2:44 PM well penned tanka kash. thank you for stopping by my poem. well appriciated

Joseph May October 12, 2012 at 8:47 AM nicely penned ...congrats on your win Kash

Tim Ryerson October 12, 2012 at 5:18 AM Exquisitely done Kash...second line is a knock-out...congrats on your win - Tim

Modupe Sefunmi October 12, 2012 at 3:12 AM Congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2012 at 12:18 AM I adore this one!! Congratulations, Kashinath.

Tahera Mannan October 11, 2012 at 11:10 PM Beautiful Kash, Many congrats on this win. Courtney Courtney October 12, 2012 at 2:05 AM nice

Joyce Johnson October 11, 2012 at 10:45 PM Very nice Kash. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Delilah Ventura October 11, 2012 at 7:23 PM That was so sweet....

Debbie Guzzi October 11, 2012 at 3:25 PM so romantic! gotta love all those moons!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown October 11, 2012 at 12:40 PM A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Kash. Love, Carol

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