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In celebration of Silent one's Bday

3rd Placement

written 17/06/2024

 

 

“a mute tongue is a slave to silence” - Silent One let the happy heart sing out loud and clear, let air vibrate, reach angels in heaven, golden rainbow awaits in rain to hear, glories that our mother earth has given. every day is day of celebration, every ray of light is a ray of hope, every breeze passes for an occasion, every hill blooms with flowers on its slope. let your tongue be the sweet voice of your soul, describe the fabric nature has woven, flush out darkness, mine out the devil’s coal, find god in each true word that is spoken. entrapment of the tongue in chains of fear, silence enforced through rivets of distress, break free for ever and shed not a tear, let joys frolic, each season in a new dress! voice is a gift to break silence beyond, silence that fills void between life and death, cut free from silence let your tongue respond, thank God in heaven, for life he bequeath.

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Date: 7/3/2024 2:18:00 PM
Really liked this one when I first read it.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/3/2024 3:27:00 PM
Thanks My friend!!
Date: 7/2/2024 9:46:00 PM
Brilliant rhymes dear krish and i love especially the poetic message that comes through your lines, “ let your tongue be the sweet voice of your soul, describe the fabric nature has woven,” powerful and profound! Soulfully moving! Pleasure reading this, congratulations on your win
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/2/2024 11:17:00 PM
Thanks Ink! What a lovely way to celebrate Silent ones bday! A very nice gesture from you and all the poets who contributed!
Date: 7/2/2024 10:22:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write for Silent One again. Have a great day writing away...............
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/2/2024 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Paula!:)
Date: 6/19/2024 2:46:00 PM
great rhymes and flow to this one Krish.. I like your take on the quote.. Thanks for writing for the contest..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/19/2024 9:15:00 PM
Thanks Silent one! My greeting to you on your bday! May it be a start of a phase of new happiness.
Date: 6/19/2024 4:47:00 AM
Krish, Beautiful words to celebrate the breaking of silence. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/19/2024 6:42:00 AM
Thanks SuZ! Delighted to have your kind words!:)
Date: 6/18/2024 6:59:00 PM
what a joyous read for silent's natal day! all the best in the contest!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/18/2024 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Nette! Happy to receive your joyous words!
Date: 6/18/2024 12:56:00 PM
What a lovely write. Love your line, "every day is day of celebration."  Silent One, Have A Great Birthday Celebration.  "Good Luck" for the contest... Have a blessed day writing away...........................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/18/2024 1:28:00 PM
Thanks Paula! much appreciate your response and support!:)

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