Let Me Whisper Sweet Lovely Things

Come close to this heart and Shh, I will whisper sweet lovely things Try to touch this soul and you will feel its innocence Hidden deep within the chambers of this heart lies a secret It is defined by its holiness, as pure as a lilly and trustworthy like a faith Yes, blessed was the day I fell in your love Folly like a ludicrous naughty child my heart went out for you Beating like the delightful fluttering of a bird Eager to tell the soul that yes I have found your partner When I met you, it was no happenstance, but everything was planned That meeting, that talks, for way before that night, my soul chooses you As his partner of all the lives, and it was restless to make you as mine For even if by perchance upon going to sleep, I would wake up with your charming dreams And one day under a white crescent moon I finally got the chance to express my love towards you wafting like two angles free of any worry We were dancing on the shore, near a sea That hand was in my hand and the body was close Ohh, how can i forget that lovely night, How beautiful were you looking, with that tremendous smile But there's more to come, all the things that I never got the chance to tell So I have written a song for you, containing all of the emotions, That are in the heart but too pure to be uttered by lips So perfect that none of the languages can contain them That song holds the story of my whole life If written, none of the papers will have the power to keep them If spoken, heavens will crumble And one day, you will hear that song with your name
27 Jan 2019, For the contest" Midnight Valentine" Sponsor" Chantelle Anne Cooke"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/6/2021 7:50:00 PM
So glad to find this beautiful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Faraz ~
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Date: 4/5/2019 12:13:00 AM
Very passionate I love how you played words and diced phrases
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Date: 3/10/2019 10:28:00 PM
You write with passion. I enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 2/25/2019 9:11:00 AM
My instant favourite ... :)
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:38:00 AM
Nicely done...
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Date: 1/26/2019 5:24:00 PM
So fervent!! I really enjoyed this.
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Date: 1/26/2019 4:24:00 PM
You are a young man but have so many romantic lines here expressed so beautifully... she must have been a beautiful girl..
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Date: 1/26/2019 3:02:00 PM
This is beautifully written! So nice! Well done :)
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