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Let me Surprise her

In the backdrop of full moon silhouette of my darling searching me among the stars..... let me surprise her! ======================= Placement:2nd;(September 2011) Contest:Dodoitsu Darkness Sponsor:Tracie~Indigo dream weaver~

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Date: 9/25/2011 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2011 2:34:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/23/2011 2:03:00 AM
Kashinath Kashinath, Where art thou, Oh, Kashinath?? (haha) I sure hope everything is ok. Just letting you know you are missed!
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Date: 9/22/2011 5:18:00 PM
Congrats Kash on super second place win with awesome poetry as always my friend..luv.. moving and commenting.. multi tasking..oh..
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Date: 9/21/2011 11:52:00 PM
Kash, I think you won in this contest. I saw the blog and it seems she gave nearly eveyone a win. So Congratulations. I am pretty sure it won! I have too much poetry to catch up on. I'm only on page three of comments. YIKES. How have you been?? Haven't heard from you lately!
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Date: 9/20/2011 3:47:00 PM
hello, are you there?? any new one, tiger??.. come !..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/20/2011 1:17:00 AM
Well done Kash-I'll get in line after Nette :)
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Date: 9/19/2011 9:16:00 AM
Hi Kashi, I love what you are seeing in your mind. Just delightful.
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Date: 9/19/2011 4:18:00 AM
hey tiger... come! :)
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:36:00 PM
Back to this darling of a poem. Hi, there, Kashinath. hmm, I forgot what I was gonna say. Oh, yes, on the halloween contest.Don't fret about it. Just write about ghosts or monsters!!
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:49:00 PM
Such a tender lovely piece Kashinath....thanks for sharing...chiquita
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:02:00 PM
yeooow, you sneaky, sweet soul, kashi.. really a romantic lion, huh? can't find the darlness here, lol... winner!
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Date: 9/18/2011 12:16:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this romantic work..Very creative..I could just see a scene..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 9/18/2011 7:26:00 AM
Kash, This is so sweet and romantic. Just buy her a box 'O chocolates and read her this one. The rest of the night will be yours! Great dodoitsu. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:22:00 AM
So cute this is, Kash. I'd say 'adorable" by the way, how can I see your "my poems" page? When I go to my poems, I see the red checks, but those are not for featured poems. Those are the poems entered in the soup contests. ARe you talking about some other red checks I don't know about? I am so confused!
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Date: 9/17/2011 11:26:00 PM
Lighthearted and lovely, best of luck in the contest and thanks for your ever kind words on my poetry ~~
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Date: 9/17/2011 7:33:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem Kash...in answer to your question about copyright, yes you just find one and then you can copy and paste it by the date you need it for. I would assume anything you post publically is copyrighted by the date it is posted though, I would still add either copyright or the symbol. Thank you for your lovely comments. Connie You have Soup Mail
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:53:00 PM
What a wonderful write Kashinath! I like the line, "let me surprise her" great line! Lovely work!!
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:17:00 PM
Very nice image and somber read to it.... well done my friend...Michael
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:14:00 PM
How cute! Indeed it may surprise...careful not to scare the dickens out of her!! Cute one, Kashinath!!
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