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Let Me Surprise Her

In the backdrop of full moon
silhouette of my darling
searching me among the stars.....
let me surprise her!



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Placement:2nd;(September 2011)

Contest:Dodoitsu Darkness

Sponsor:Tracie~Indigo dream weaver~

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/25/2011 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Kashinath. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2011 2:34:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2011 2:03:00 AM

Kashinath Kashinath, Where art thou, Oh, Kashinath?? (haha) I sure hope everything is ok. Just letting you know you are missed!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2011 5:18:00 PM

Congrats Kash on super second place win with awesome poetry as always my friend..luv.. moving and commenting.. multi tasking..oh..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2011 11:52:00 PM

Kash, I think you won in this contest. I saw the blog and it seems she gave nearly eveyone a win. So Congratulations. I am pretty sure it won! I have too much poetry to catch up on. I'm only on page three of comments. YIKES. How have you been?? Haven't heard from you lately!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/20/2011 3:47:00 PM

hello, are you there?? any new one, tiger??.. come !..:) huggs, nette

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 9/20/2011 1:17:00 AM

Well done Kash-I'll get in line after Nette :)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/19/2011 9:16:00 AM

Hi Kashi, I love what you are seeing in your mind. Just delightful.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2011 4:18:00 AM

hey tiger... come! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2011 9:36:00 PM

Back to this darling of a poem. Hi, there, Kashinath. hmm, I forgot what I was gonna say. Oh, yes, on the halloween contest.Don't fret about it. Just write about ghosts or monsters!!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/18/2011 1:49:00 PM

Such a tender lovely piece Kashinath....thanks for sharing...chiquita

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/18/2011 1:02:00 PM

yeooow, you sneaky, sweet soul, kashi.. really a romantic lion, huh? can't find the darlness here, lol... winner!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2011 12:16:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this romantic work..Very creative..I could just see a scene..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/18/2011 7:26:00 AM

Kash, This is so sweet and romantic. Just buy her a box 'O chocolates and read her this one. The rest of the night will be yours! Great dodoitsu. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2011 1:22:00 AM

So cute this is, Kash. I'd say 'adorable" by the way, how can I see your "my poems" page? When I go to my poems, I see the red checks, but those are not for featured poems. Those are the poems entered in the soup contests. ARe you talking about some other red checks I don't know about? I am so confused!

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2011 11:26:00 PM

Lighthearted and lovely, best of luck in the contest and thanks for your ever kind words on my poetry ~~

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/17/2011 7:33:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem Kash...in answer to your question about copyright, yes you just find one and then you can copy and paste it by the date you need it for. I would assume anything you post publically is copyrighted by the date it is posted though, I would still add either copyright or the symbol. Thank you for your lovely comments. Connie You have Soup Mail