Laura Breidenthal Poet Free verse

Let Me Rise

A sore kiss from the sun
Reminds this heart of the light
The energy that must manifest in gold
That must be shared - humbly, freely, genuinely
I remember that I am but a beam,
And not a blaze
A stream,
And not an ocean
A glance, 
And not a gaze

Press the burning coal upon my heart 
Keep it there long 
Purify my being
Cast my iniquities to the flames 
Quiet his prideful reign
And let me rise to see the day

August 11, 2018

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Stephan McBride December 7, 2022 at 9:14 PM Amen we remember He is the vine and we are a branch,. And a branch can not live on its own it has to receive life from the vine,. Love ya Laura Breidenthal December 8, 2022 at 9:13 PM Wise words, Stephan! ~Laura

David William Breidenthal August 17, 2018 at 3:58 AM Beautifully written. Such an intriguing poem. Thanks for sharing!

John Lawless August 13, 2018 at 4:50 PM this captures the pain and loneliness of "that moment of awakening" to a new day, a new life, a new you. Beautifully written Laura Laura Breidenthal August 13, 2018 at 6:27 PM An awakening indeed. You understand, John. Thank you for such kind words. <3 ~Laura

Susan Ashley August 13, 2018 at 2:08 PM Wow! Laura, my imagination is awed as my heart and soul are exalted by your beautiful introspection; 'I remember that I am but a beam, And not a blaze A stream, And not an ocean A glance, And not a gaze'.. my excited heart skipped beats when I read your inspired words. A wondrous feeling of appreciation and self-empowerment runs through your lovely lines.. Exquisite and enthralling poetry! Warmest wishes always. ~Susan Laura Breidenthal August 13, 2018 at 4:01 PM Thank you Susan! You're always so kind and encouraging! Really happy that you enjoyed! <3 ~Laura