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Let Me Live Alone

Let Me traverse through the unique path, Let my thoughts move freely, Let me go where no one has gone, Let me live alone. Let me blow like air, Let me flow like river, Let me share my thoughts in my tone, Let me live alone. Let the world change it's way, Let the people go away, Let them criticize my dare, Let them know, I don't care. Let the people hurt me again and again, Let the people give me pain, Let the people be selfish all the way, One day I will throw them away. Let me make the the difference, Let me show my Importance, Let me do, What no one has done, Let me live alone !!!! Let me live alone !!!! Let me live alone !!!! Let me live alone !!!!

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Skat A

Date: 8/4/2015 9:14:00 PM

RAHUL, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/24/2015 6:30:00 PM

Rahul, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/24/2015 2:59:00 PM

Rahul, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Rahul Kumar
Date: 7/25/2015 12:16:00 AM

Hello Skat... Thanku So much for my warm welcome. I am always ready to get friend with people like you who really support the beginners. This is Rahul from India. Apart from poem, I use to write thoughts as well. You can check my FB Page @ https://www.facebook.com/BeingPositiveAlwaysWorks?ref=aymt_homepage_panel and share your thoughts too. Thanks.....

Elizabeth Agiantritis

Date: 7/24/2015 3:39:00 AM

Nicely written. I like the repetition of "Let me live alone" at the end. It conveys more power that way. Just one thing though, you seem to have written "the" twice in the first line of the second to last verse. I guess it's just a typo, but you might like to correct it.