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Let Me Go

stay don’t go stay don’t leave stay don’t go stay don’t leave stay s y s y s y s y s y s set me free y s s s y s s s y s s s y s s s y s s s y s set me free y s X y s s y s e y s t y s m y s e y s f y s r y s e y s e y s y s y s y s y s y stay don’t go stay don’t leave stay don’t go stay don’t leave stay AP: 1st place 2020 Submitted on August 8, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 1, AUGUST 2019 - JUST WRITE sponsored by DEAR HEART - RANKED 2ND

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John Watt

Date: 3/13/2020 2:35:00 AM

Another great concept and excellent rendering of a balloon in a box (did I get that right?) with the poem's subject in bold letters for emphasis. Love it! Reminds me of the Cat Stevens song Father and Son where the father is singing "Stay" as the son sings "Away". Love it, a fav ~ John

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/13/2020 8:13:00 AM

Thanks, John. Absolutely~ it's a balloon in a box. Thanks for the compliment. Most appreciated.

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 8/14/2019 5:40:00 AM

Wow, what a wonderful form which literally contains the content in itself. This is what I call the ideal concept. Congrats, Line. I love your "stay don’t go" prison which clearly shows that any prison is just a concept, consisted of printing signs.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/14/2019 7:10:00 AM

Thank you for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Kurt.