Debbie Duncan Poet Free verse

Let Me Come Over

Oh, baby, let me come over 
I could show you  a world
We could both fade into
Show you things like nobody else could

We could roll the dice and play all day
Fly past the angels and ride the rainbows

Come walk with me through the raindrops 
Let the sparks fly where they may 
As we walk through the sunsets together  
It's all I wanna do with you 

Yes I think we could try 
Learn to fly ~ come be with me 
Because I really need you now
I wanna hold your hand 

I wanna make you feel wanted 
Wrap me up in your love 
We could fly so high, where 
Angels touch the sky 

I just want to feel wanted 
Let me be the one you run to
I feel you on the edge of my fingers 
Tell me, are you really there

Should I know better than 
to call you out like I do 
I don't mean any disrespect now 
I just want to keep coming around 


5 am Jan. 4 / 2013 Friday 
I was bored, so I wrote

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Lucilla Carrillo February 23, 2013 at 2:41 PM I agree with Andrea. This is a Gem of a poem. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Debbie Duncan February 23, 2013 at 3:25 PM Thank you Luccilla ;}

Andrea Dietrich February 16, 2013 at 8:18 PM debbie, I don't know how this gem ever got by me. But it was right here all this time waiting to be read. If this is what you do when you are bored, you gotta get bored more often!!! Debbie Duncan February 17, 2013 at 12:10 PM ;}

Bl Devnath February 13, 2013 at 3:36 PM To pass the boring time, it's a nice style to come over, my friend. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl Debbie Duncan February 15, 2013 at 2:08 PM Thank you bl ;}

Bethany St John February 2, 2013 at 1:09 PM Loved reading this one! If only my boredom caused such inspiration :) great write! Debbie Duncan February 2, 2013 at 2:16 PM Thank you Bethany ;}

Elizabeth O'Driscoll January 22, 2013 at 4:33 AM Wonderful poem Debbie. Love Elizabeth Debbie Duncan January 27, 2013 at 11:51 AM Thank you Liz ;}

Lucilla Carrillo January 21, 2013 at 10:35 PM This is what happens when you get bore. You get inspired. Good work.Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Debbie Duncan January 21, 2013 at 11:33 PM Thank you Lucilla ;}

Ravindra K Kapoor January 12, 2013 at 7:56 PM What a beautiful Poem you have sketched Debbie. How lovely is the flight touching the sky and feeling the rainbow. All sad things are always beautiful and thing one too. Thanks for your wonderful comments on my Song/Poem. Love and best wishes..Ravindra... Debbie Duncan January 14, 2013 at 9:58 AM Thank you ;}

Robert Pettit January 8, 2013 at 7:22 PM You mean you were "bored". Good fancifully descriptive write. Debbie Duncan January 9, 2013 at 10:04 AM Thank you Robert ;}

Don Johnson January 7, 2013 at 4:30 PM ah well we have these secret needs, where love n passion intercedes, and heat n steam decries our deeds, just lovers in our fashion.....

Don Johnson January 7, 2013 at 2:04 PM poor man he misses cuddles, has she shut the door on you, life has lack of bubbles, when a shiela says we are through... Happy new year....xox

Robert Johnson January 7, 2013 at 12:43 PM And from the heart we will take note. :)

Kash Poet January 7, 2013 at 9:11 AM An inspirational write from you Debbie!Enjoyed the read.Thanks for visiting my poem page.

Kerry Singleton January 5, 2013 at 6:55 PM Great write Debbie, I have felt this way for many years about someone..

Carma Sanderson January 5, 2013 at 6:12 PM Fantastic write Debbie, love the emotions of this divine piece of boredom lol, from top to bottom thanks for sharing it... Love always Carma xx

Sara Kendrick January 5, 2013 at 9:55 AM Enjoyed reading your work that came out of boredom..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2013 at 11:16 AM This is both a little sad and beautiful at the same time, Debbie. - But, I like it, well written!! xoxo / / Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan January 4, 2013 at 3:43 PM Thank you Anne ;}

Duke Beaufort January 4, 2013 at 8:59 AM This is the kind of thing that gives guys goosebumps. It's kinda sexy in a very nice way. Wish you could clone this as an injection! Have a great year and keep in touch. I haven't written anything yet this year (so I am a little jealous). Debbie Duncan January 4, 2013 at 3:44 PM Thank you Duke ;}