Let Me Be Empty

Let me be empty
Oh, and weightless
a solitary feather on the wind
for the weight is heavy 
like snow pressing on winters limb
my heart grown frail 
now paper thin 

Come not close 
lest transparent eyes
reveal what lies just beneath the ice
A blazing fire 
frozen in motion
so sudden this storm
of overwhelming emotions

A cold and oh
such a quizzical thing
how drastically a landscape can change
In a soul or a life
In a day over night
yet neath the soil hides hope of the spring

The sun will send its rays
and these storms will pass away
Opaque tears will turn 
from days colored frozen 
back to a brazen fiery way
In the book of the broken
finding rest on clarities page

But today let me be empty
Oh, and weightless
for so heavy my burdens be
cast me a feather floating on the wind
till this freezing storm be shapeless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 8:20 AM
I love the Metamorphisis within these words. I wish for you to be filled with the spirit of weightlessness, for you to have your wings fully stretched and pressing on the winds as they have you rise above frozen ground. May all your landscapes be magnificent as is your spirit. Amen
Ioane Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 5:59 AM
Honoured to have read this, such depth and poetic expressions.
Ellison Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 7:40 AM
"till this freezing storm be shapeless" I've said it before but I must say it again... YOU ASTOUND me! This poem exemplifies the strength of your heart and soul! "I WILL SURVIVE" comes through loud and clear! I can't find the words to express my love and admiration for how you can rise above it all and still be sweet Sarai! Love Charlie XOX
Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 4:31 AM
A lighthearted yet lyrical poem in fabulous wording! I esp likd how u say, 'opaque tears'. Kudos poetess.
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