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Let Me...My Lord !!

Let Me..... My Lord !! i am s soldier a soldier in a war with the twilight i have to step aheAd and march far before i leave my lord let me meet my beloved let me hold her hand let me ask her 2 live again if incase i die 4 my land let me take a promise let me take a swear that after my departure she wouldn't weep with her tangled hair as i depart i see tears running down her cheek as if her eyes knew that after its we'l never meet alas!! in the war my soul was ask 2 leave but i plead 2 my lord let me hug my eve it was the last time when i could hold her again it was a miserable moment with surrounding smiles of pain as i saw her i smiled & ton approached "i'm coming along" quoting White silent cries echoed with crystals in our hand & the cheer of the wine the define couple departed hoping one day i'l b hers and she'l be mine.... !!! GOOD BYE !!!

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Date: 2/19/2016 10:01:00 PM
meghna thourani, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 11:02:00 AM
:)
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Date: 12/20/2015 3:13:00 PM
MEGHNA, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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