Let It Rain

"let it rain"

let it rain if emotions clear
allow the pour until life shines
rainbows are just around the bend
with every storm the sun is near
follow the path and its outlines
the grace of peace will transcend
rain and her pours forever sustain

SkyWatcher
06-09-23

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/1/2023 12:01:00 PM

Hello Lisa, I like the rain. I like to walk in the drizzle. i like to feel the raindrops touch my skin. The sound of the rain drops hitting the window sends me into a deep sleep. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2023 10:54:00 AM

Hello Lisa, Yes I will enjoy the next rainfall. The rainwater is good for the plants outdoor. It makes the grass greener. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene/

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/2/2023 4:01:00 AM

Good Morning Darlene. Hi. Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts. Yes, the rain does have a purpose (smile). Have a wonderful morning and day. Enjoy the next rainfall (smile smile smile). Blessings always.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/22/2023 2:55:00 PM

Nice light poetry, Lisa. I'm glad you have these moments of peacefulness from time to time, and that you share them with us through your poetry. I could us a nice cleansing rain shower for about an hour. Or just a waterfall to let the moisture for on me as I float in the pool below. Oops, slipping away in dreamland here. Smiles my dear friend, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/23/2023 2:25:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. Hi. Peace is something we never get enough of. Thank you ever so much for sharing your intake and comments and you as well. Never do I take your visits and commentary for granted. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. I will return to your page very soon. Blessings always (smile)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2023 8:08:00 AM

Derp with beautiful reflective thought

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/12/2023 2:31:00 AM

Hi Andrea. Good Morning. Thank you very much. Yes the rain and its pours are for the good for cleansing and more. Have a wonderful morning and day. Thank you again. Blessings (smile)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/10/2023 12:06:00 PM

Nice piece Lisa with good imagery and insightful line of thought too. Blessings always,Gordon

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/11/2023 2:35:00 AM

Hi Gordon. Good Morning. Thank you as always Gordon and thank you for mentioning imagery because that means a lot. Truly. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always (smile)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/10/2023 11:30:00 AM

Nothing beats a good downpour to clear the air Lisa, afterwards everything comes back to life again. Hope your weekend is going well Lisa. Tom

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/11/2023 2:32:00 AM

Hello Tom. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much for your generous commentary and intake. Yes, the rain and its pours do cleanse. I hope all is well with you also. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always (smile)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/10/2023 9:30:00 AM

After a time in the hospital, I was not in the mood to admire the rain.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/11/2023 2:30:00 AM

Good Morning Once Again Victor. Hi. Once again I am so very sorry you needed to be in the hospital. Yes, the last thing on your mind would be logging onto read and review entries with your mind being elsewhere. Thank you for visiting. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile and feel better)