Let It Go

Dinner was over an hour ago
Counters wiped clean, dishes are washed and dried
I hold my glass up to the light like a color slide,
   and see the world, warped, and blurred through the half glass of rosy wine

It makes everything seem clearer, somehow, and sobers my mind

From our long silhouettes, we sit on the lawn, and gaze to the mountains,
                    talking quietly, and sipping the pink charodonnay

Dark of the shade seems to drink up the light of day

Summer carols being sung by two mourning doves, 
                    are accompanied by a choir of crickets in the dewy grass
                    calling for reverence in honor of a dying sun
  
Soft voices are lifted in still air
The pink light seems to paralyze time.

We have found kindness here, 
                     and somehow the grueling trials of the year
                     seem smaller than they did yesterday

Now the day turns toward the darkness
                     and we have rid our taste of the dry and bitter dust
                     of everything that has been said and done

The north wind shakes the trees
                      and the last leaf that clung so fast and tight
                      releases its grip, and disappears into the dusk

We shall never need to see where it lands 
                      for we  are  forbidden strangers to the dark
Let us remain friends with the light

Let us unclench our old resistance

And after we have finished the last drop of wine
                      we will turn, and go inside
                      and thank our stars
                      for the pungent taste
                      that yet lingers
                      on our tongues

                      in case
                      we might
                      need
                      proof 
                      that some years will harvest a bitter taste....

                      and  
                      some
                      years
                      will
                      harvest
                      a
                      crop
                      blessed
                      by
                      the
                      sun
                      

                      



_____________________________________
For Deb's Contest: "Referential" 
reference: Chris Aechtner's Poem:  unclench fists

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/16/2011 2:26:00 PM
thank you for your comment and yes i'm doing fine, hope your the same. enjoyed reading this poem it has a nice flow to it.
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:33:00 AM
Your narrative gave me a "Flashback"..."Whatever happened to "Sitting Out"? ... Thank you for this very memorable writing.....
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:50:00 PM
Carrie, this is very descriptive writing. It will still be a while before anyone can casually go outside and look at the mountains.
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