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Let It Flow

Rivulets of crimson blood Ooze tantalisingly from the gaping wound on her neck He drinks hungrily, savouring every salty drop Dracula wraps his black cape around his shoulders Fleeing in the moonlight to his crypt in the churchyard. 07~25~16 Crimson Contest Sponsored by Royal Ninja

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/9/2016 6:44:00 PM

Love how you can write so many different styles and themes! This little nugget is darkly descriptive, a great piece of writing! blessings, lynn

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2016 12:50:00 AM

Thanks Lynn:-) I do surprise people with my more serious writes - I never know where my muse is going to take me. If it hadn't been for my husband's cancer surgery in Nov 2013 I would never have picked up my pen and started writing!:-) hugs Jan xx

Louis Borgo

Date: 7/28/2016 9:03:00 AM

A dark and passion it work of art, Louis.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2016 9:12:00 AM

Thanks so much Louis:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 7/26/2016 4:52:00 PM

S P O O K Y.....

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2016 5:02:00 PM

Thanks Jean I do like to vary my style a little and surprise people:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 7/26/2016 4:44:00 PM

Jan, BEAUTIFUL, I love this so much ~

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2016 4:46:00 PM

Oh thanks Constance - I was amazed when my son read it and liked it so thought I would give it a go in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2016 10:18:00 PM

Oh, yes let it flow. Wonderful read. Skat

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2016 2:32:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 7/25/2016 4:53:00 PM

Fav, excellent take on the theme. Yeah that guy sucks the blood from your neck whatever you do...no matter how I'll you are...do not go to Dr. Acula.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2016 4:57:00 PM

LOL aww thanks Armand - I could watch that video over and over the poem and delivery of the poem are so wonderful:-) it really is marvelous to see you back today:-) hugs Jan xx I'm actually seeing the vampire nurse tomorrow so maybe that is the reason for the dark poem lol:-) xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/25/2016 4:50:00 PM

...any more visits to the blood bank, and he'll be overdrawn..... Fine little write, hope it gets red by everyone. Good luck. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2016 4:55:00 PM

Thanks Mr Viv - oh heck I;m seeing the vampire nurse tomorrow - am going on my own for the first time EVER - wish me luck:-):-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2016 1:50:00 PM

- A deep dark poetry, dear Jan - But no one dare mess with Dracula ..... a great write - Good luck in the contest, hope you win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2016 1:52:00 PM

Thanks Anne lise - I think this poem has surprised many that I can write other than humour:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 7/25/2016 12:30:00 PM

Wow Jan!I looked for a funny twist at the end,but the Dracula was relentless:)Its a brilliant write Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2016 12:36:00 PM

Thanks Sara:-) I do surprise people with my serious writes lol:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2016 12:14:00 PM

Jan, I do like when you write this way. Love it. I left you a message on that one blog. LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2016 12:17:00 PM

Thanks for supporting me Linda I am saddened that the blog has disintegrated into a slanging match :-( so much for sincerity lol:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2016 12:11:00 PM

Jan, I do like when you write this way. Love it. I left you a message on that one blog. LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2016 12:15:00 PM

Thanks Linda - am not sure if it appeals to Royal or not but I just go with the flow of my muse:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 7/25/2016 10:55:00 AM

Jan, love this because I love vampires lol I watch all vampire tv shows and this caught my eye right away lady! good luck it caught the essence of what the contest is about in a different way, great take on the contest :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2016 10:58:00 AM

Thanks Laura:-) hugs Jan xx