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Let It Breathe - For Contest

Let It Breathe Sweet kiss of sun and passion’s soil wrapped in twisted lover’s tryst love’s essence captured in a moment blessed by sea-scent moistened mist cradled in long arms of family hidden from frail season’s view undusted days of aging darkness ancient hope of purplish blue wisdom clear of sediment locked in dry-corked mystery sipped, served, and savored sparingly lingering hint of history. John G. Lawless 8/13/2015 submitted – a wine connoisseur – Poetry Contest sponsor – Chase Trevi

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Date: 8/13/2015 11:26:00 PM
Very wonderful n expressive John, packed with similes I loved to read! Gl in contest!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 6:58:00 AM
I tried to weave a poetic metaphor around a well aged subject. Thanks for stopping by Dr. Sharma.
Date: 8/13/2015 9:48:00 AM
I find your poem very sexy is that for a lady your trying to impress lol.I know it's for a contest, very nice poem I'm sure you will win!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 6:57:00 AM
Lissette, thanks for stopping by to read and comment.

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