Carole Duet Poet Sonnet

Let It Be

There is a place I know quite far from here, 
Across the oceans and so far away 
Where there lives a poet who is a dear, 
When here tis night and over there tis day. 

So let me conjure a fantasy 
In which dogwood trees are blooming pure white 
And only you and I can clearly see 
Birds of red and blue above us in flight. 

The air is scented with a sweet perfume 
In this enchanted fairyland of dreams 
Of happy days and nights that end too soon 
As we share our spirits, hearts, and sweet schemes. 

If only we were able to be free 
To let it be, let it be, let it be. 



By:  Rick Keeble and Carole O'Terry Duet
        (A Collaboration)
        Copyright:  Dec. 8, 2016
         "All Rights Reserved"

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Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2018 at 5:58 PM YOu painted a lovely picture with your sonnet here. Also, I love Paul M.!! Carole Duet March 1, 2018 at 12:55 AM Thank you Andrea. Yes, this is one of my favorite collaborations. I used to love writing with White Wolf. And, me too. I love Paul M.

Richard Evans October 14, 2017 at 1:26 PM Oh, lovely. Really diggin' this. Again command of form is the key here. Command of form is where great poems are born. Thanks for sharing.............peace! Carole Duet October 15, 2017 at 4:07 PM Well thank you, Richard, and thanks for dropping by. So glad you liked this one. Come back now ya hear! And "peace" to you too. Carole Duet

Robert Lindley July 4, 2017 at 1:05 PM A TRULY WONDROUS AND UPLIFTING SONNET , PENNED BY TWO GREAT POETS. Flowed as if written by one pen , which is a marvelous feat in itself. Bravo, to both poets. A gem and now a fav for me. Carole Duet July 5, 2017 at 1:45 AM Thank you so much, Robert. I will have to tell Budgie (White Wolf/Rick Keeble) what you said. It was our first collaboration and was such a joy to do.He and I are basically opposites and yet we think so much alike. So, it was "easy peasy". lol Carole

Darlene De Beaulieu January 8, 2017 at 2:56 PM I love this poem . A good write. Carole Duet January 9, 2017 at 12:01 AM I'm so glad you liked it, Darlene. Rick Keeble (White Wolf) was such a pleasure to write with. Carole Duet

Edward Mccall December 11, 2016 at 2:34 PM That is a great collaboration. Well done. Carole Duet December 26, 2016 at 1:00 AM Thanks, Edward.

Chris Green December 9, 2016 at 2:44 PM Bravo to both poets, this one swept me away as I read it today. What a wonderful collaboration of amazing poets. I could feel the love in this, it was beautiful. Carole Duet December 9, 2016 at 4:35 PM Thanks, Chris. You got it!!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2016 at 3:35 AM - A wonderful poem, from both of you Carole & Rick :) - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Carole Duet December 9, 2016 at 2:27 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise! I enjoyed doing it. Rick was such an inspiration.

White Wolf December 8, 2016 at 7:05 PM Well done, Carole! Think I'll keep this one! Carole Duet December 8, 2016 at 7:12 PM Me too!! :-D