Let It Be

The rumours were persistent; the split was on the cards
sad news to music lovers, despair for lonely hearts.
Fab Four disintegrated, a tragedy for some,
but fame by then was certain, a legend to become.

        My mates and fans forever declared fidelity
        and threw a crazy party...they called it Let It Be!

The sound reverberated; the place was dimly lit,
the atmosphere inviting; each song a Beatles’ hit.

We bumped into each other as we reached out for wine.
We clicked...tacit agreement, which suited us just fine.
I asked her name in passing, not wanting to intrude,
She laughed and coyly told me, “Hey, babe, just call me Jude.”

We merged with rhythmic music; unnoticed time went by.
Our drinks were spiked, and goodness, that sent us really high!

We danced till early morning, and that’s when I passed out
I came to on a sofa to beat of Twist and Shout.

Two drowsy days then followed, as well as restless nights;
with blurry eyes all heavy, could not withstand the lights.
I often think and wonder ‘bout Jude my stranger-friend
who whispered with insistence: ‘I wanna hold your hand’.

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Contest: Rock ‘n Roll Rhyme Fest
Sponsor: Phillip Garcia
© 8th September 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 5:19 AM
This was very clever, very cleverly written indeed! Everything worked here, everything flowed. I don't rate very often, but this was a 7 for me. I really enjoyed this. Wonderful job! MC
Callus Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 3:20 PM
You are supportive and a source of encouragement, MC...thank you! Best regards // paul
Duet Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 11:05 PM
Wow! What a party! What a poem! Great, Paul.
Callus Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Glad you enjoyed the party, Carole:) Thank you for stopping by! Regards // paul
Hay Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:08 AM
#7 - BRILLIANT!!!! I love the story this tells and how it ends in particular, pure genius Paul, well done, warm regards, Laura.
Callus Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 6:04 PM
You are too kind, Laura...thank you:) ~ Warm regards // paul
Neumann Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 1:37 AM
This is great, I love this. Congratulations and many wishes, Kai
Callus Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 6:03 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Kai...thank you! Regards // paul
Arnone Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Another great Beatles tribute. I should have spent more time at this! Congrats, Paul. :-)
Callus Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Thank you, Tom, for a most welcome visit. // paul
Hamilton Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 5:48 PM
Great write Paul, although I prefer, Georges solo stuff better, Johns too, not so crazy about McCartney don't know why, anyway I digress,congrats on the win well deserved!
Callus Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Thank you for a pleasant visit, John. Such a pity the Beatles disbanded...they still had so much to offer! Regards // paul
Garcia Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Paul - thank you so much for this beautiful poem. It rightly could have placed higher but be proud of gorgeous write. I had to choke back tears upon the last line - maybe it's just b/c I'm overly emotional these days but more likely it's because, as usual, you captured perfectly life's emotions through smoothly penned poetic lines. Congratulations.
Callus Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 5:54 PM
Your insightful comments are truly satisfying, Phillip! Thank you for liking my poem and finding a place for it on your winners' list. Best regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 12:51 AM
Now this is impressive! Fantastic!!! 777777
Callus Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Your fantastic7s are much appreciated, Richard! Thank you. Excuse the late reply, but the new system often plays tricks on me! Regards // paul
May Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Very nicely done Paul...sounds like a great party...but when its all said and done.."Here comes the sun!".....
Callus Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Thank you for the comments and the 'like', Joseph. 'Here comes the sun' reflects Harrison's musical ability; it is one of the best songs on Abbey Road, together with 'Something'...!! Regards // paul
Manassian Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 8:58 AM
OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS. Paul....you are such a talented man. Honestly...this rocked the house. :) So well written!!! Good luck, dear.
Callus Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Your capitals make me grow wings, Eileen:) Love your generous comments...you ROCK!! Hugs // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 8:46 PM
Paul this is a cute poem it made me smile.
Callus Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 5:18 PM
I'm pleased it elicited a smile, Darlene:) Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Love3 your clever use of the titles interwoven into your poem - great nostalgic write Paul:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Thank you for the positive feedback, Jan. I'm not sure if this is what the sponsor is after, but that's where my muse took me! Hugs :) // paul
Turner Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Had me laughing Paul! Love this nostalgic write. Yeah, I was and still am a big Beatles fan. I also loved the fact that they all went on to have spectacular solo careers. This should do really well in contest. Good luck:):)
Callus Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Thank you; glad you found this to your liking, Daniel:) I have many singers/bands close to my heart, but I grew up with the Beatles so they are somewhat closer! Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Excellent story and use of the Beatles tilted. Good luck Paul
Callus Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Many thanks, Tim; glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul
Yvonne Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 11:45 AM
Absolutely Brilliant. I love this poem with all my heart. A Huge Fav! (and not just because i love the beatles or the memories it stirred. this one's a gem.)
Callus Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 4:45 PM
Hi Armand! Your great comments are very much appreciated:) Thank you, including the fav. By the way...I enjoyed watching and hearing you on you tube!:) Regards // paul
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