James Edward Lee Sr. Poet Haiku

Let Er Rip-

yonder tree so falls
 being cut down trimmed and all
saw just let er rip

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bubbling boiling clog
having an upset stomach 
flatulent just gas 

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rooted gases brews 
holding back stomach hard pangs 
past gas let er rip

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race start to finish 
get on, your mark get set, go 
start just let er rip

7/1/21
FOR LET ER RIP CONTEST
Sponsored by: John Lawless





Poem Syllable Counter Results
Syllables Per Line:	5 7 5 0 0 0 5 7 5 0 0 0 5 7 5 0 0 0 5 7 5
Total # Syllables:	68
Total # Lines:	21  (Including empty lines)

Total # Words:	57

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Rama Balasubramanian July 1, 2021 at 10:45 AM Excellent take on the contest theme. All the best James Edward Lee Sr. July 1, 2021 at 12:43 PM Thank you ever-so much friend Rama... Write On!