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A sexy win and I like the form you chose.

love the alliteration in this sensual write many congrats on yoiu win:-) hugs jan xx

- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Fate ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

an alluring write, fate.. hope to read more from your pages.. big cheers on your fine win!

This one would also have been a winner in Dr. Ram's contest. A wonderful first offering to the soup. You will fit in nicely.

Hi Fate ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA

Fate, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Fate:) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Hi Fate, I love this poem.... The form is called alliteration. Not, many poets around here can pull off this form perfectly this way. I'm rating your poem with a 7. An awesome first poem,:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@