Lessons

"Lessons" 
By: Eric L. Boddie

My name is was, always has been, 
Strong, when it comes to a poetic pen 
My talent is deep, not ripped off a dictionary 
Straight from the street, pushing rhymes 
You can sit and soak behind my words 
Breathe in my light, it might do you right. --PD 

And that means I am will be 
I am the future you will see 
I will provide ink for your pen 
I will supply chills for your skin 
I will write my way into your heart 
I will erase any obstacle you may start 
Simply because I adore the mind 
God Trusted to you, it is great to intertwine --EB 

Baring it all, I have nothing to hide 
A long way in, a long way out 
Creating demons, jousting thy pen 
On any given night I will destroy the enemy --PD 

And before we leave, let's get one thing clear 
Our words will whip that ass for the inspiration of a tear.... EB 

~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 10:32 AM
WOW what a masterpiece collaboration reflecting brilliant minds at work! Excellently blended piece that I enjoyed reading! Congratulations - congratulations on a well-deserved win! Pandita
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 10:22 AM
thank you pandita....that means a lot because your talent speaks for itself....;)
Roper Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 12:11 AM
Eric, BIG congratulations on your wonderful win! An absolutely brilliant work of art with collaboration with Linda Well done. Hugs Eve
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 10:21 AM
thanks eve....as a big fan of yours, that means a lot....;)
A. Sharma Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 11:12 PM
Congrats eric for a big win with this very beautiful collaboration with Linda!
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 10:19 AM
thanks doc....but she deserves the credit....I just tried to keep up....;)
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 10:20 PM
You complimented each other really well! Congrats for your win.
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 10:18 AM
thanks andrea....it was really easy writing with pd....;)
A  Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Eric, Congratulations on your win.-----SKAT
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 10:16 AM
thanks skat....;)
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Dropping back with my congrats to you both:-) hugs Jan xx
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 10:15 AM
thanks jan....;)
A   Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Hello Eric, Congratulations on your awesome win. I'm overwhelmed on the outcome of every poem. Stop by my latest blog "MY FELLINGS" or my newest poem "FLESH" if you'd like or have time. I'd like to post the collaboration on my poem list in the near future with your permission. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 10:14 AM
of course you have my permission....and flesh is pretty good....lol
Y. Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:21 PM
Wow! Eric you and PD did a excellent collaboration.There is some lesson's to be learned indeed. Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Boddie Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 2:17 PM
thank you alexis....I just tried to keep up with pda....;)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Very entertaining and raw. A great collaboration.
Boddie Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 10:39 PM
thank you Richard....it was all pd's idea....
A  Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 12:26 AM
I love the first 4 lines, and last 2 lines. Lesson learned. **skat**
Boddie Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 11:35 AM
so you didn't like the middle then....:(....lol
Scott Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 11:48 PM
Great pen both. I enjoyed reading!!! Awesome job!!!
Boddie Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 11:34 AM
thank you Yolanda....I just tried to keep up with her....;)
A   Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Eric, thank you for taking me up on my contest. The slam idea was great fun, thank you for choosing something different, always ~LINDA~
Boddie Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 4:42 PM
what can I say....I am different....and thank you for the Beautiful push you gave....and there are a lot of interesting and inspiring contest ideas....maybe I can keep sharpening my skill....;)
Breidenthal Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 2:27 PM
This was just awesome in every way. Loved it all, you two! Always, Laura
Boddie Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 2:38 PM
thank you laura....its for the collab competition....;)
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 2:14 PM
wow guys what a powerful write - a wonderful collaboration - especially love the final couplet:-) hugs jan xx
Boddie Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 2:37 PM
thank you jan....another's inspiration brings out our best....;)
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