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swaying from one extreme to the other caught in ambiguity change for the sake of change AP: 2nd place 2021 Submitted on February 25, 2018 for contest LATE FEB 2018 STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 2/25/2018 10:55:00 PM
Profound, Line. Kudos. Stray thought time: Since "kimo" style was invented in Israel, maaybe the Jews can claim kwansaba too---just change it to K'far Saba! (An Israeli town, whose name literally means "Village of the Grandfather.")...Anyway, whatever...I'm still contemplating your poem!
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Date: 2/26/2018 9:44:00 AM
You're too clever for your own good sometimes, Gershon. LOL Thank you so much for your visit and ever witty comment. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/25/2018 1:11:00 PM
Nicely said!
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Date: 2/25/2018 1:17:00 PM
Thank you for your visit, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/25/2018 11:02:00 AM
Great one Line! :)
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Date: 2/25/2018 12:16:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Have an awesome week!

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