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Lending a hand

Lending a hand, we fell behind Making way for the weak No longer trapped in ego’s bind There’s nothing now we seek God’s light glows in each heart Gentling touch, a learnt art All are one, none apart We took a stand Lending a hand

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/9/2024 4:02:00 PM

No longer trapped in ego’s bind There’s nothing now we seek…enjoyed!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/9/2024 6:03:00 PM

Thank you, Kim

Mark Toney

Date: 11/9/2024 8:49:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my Flash Poetry Challenge, Unseeking Seeker. Your poem was randomly chosen to feature in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. Your poem is inspiring!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/9/2024 6:03:00 PM

Thank you, Mark. A novel idea, this flash poetry challenge

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/5/2024 5:38:00 AM

I cannot understand why Poet Soup does not include Quietus is not included in your list of forms in poetry. A remarkable poem.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/5/2024 9:04:00 AM

Gracious of you to say so, Victor. I’d say, let Quietus be and instead recognise Constanza invented by the late Connie Marcum Wong

Lin Lane

Date: 11/5/2024 3:04:00 AM

Hi Seeker. I don't see your special word. Allow me... this is very blissful. ;-)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/5/2024 3:37:00 AM

Hahaha ~ you are right, Lin. Love, light and bliss is our essence, immediate and intimate, imbibed if but we poise in silence with a pure heart and breathe in the elixirous fragrance of grace.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/4/2024 10:14:00 PM

Poetry form ~ Quietus