Lemon-Rick

There once was a lady sublime Who complained for sex had no time. Considering my bent, she was not heaven-sent. And her name has no place in this rhyme.

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/28/2016 11:29:00 PM

P.S. Thanks for the correction in my "Beautiful Callouses" poem ... the 'callous heart' section wasn't talking about me, per say, since the whole poem was fictional.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/28/2016 11:27:00 PM

A four line limerick ... quite rebellious ;) Not even worthy of a mention, that's harsh. But perhaps the punishment is fitting considering the crime ... lol. I'm sure your title is something quite clever, but you might have to explain it to me, for I'm not clicking what "lemon-rick" means.