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Lekker Contest

L ooking good she thinks, looking slim E yeing the glow that's coming from within K nowing that all eyes will be upon her K neeling at the altar will be LEKKER E very person will have eyes that stream R econstructed legs has allowed this dream D oesn't know when pain will ease R emarked on the baskets of doves for release E yes now misted over Tad must be my guide A t the stroke of 12 ,my husband will be at my side M aking me for sure the happiest bride

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/1/2013 9:41:00 PM

love your winning poem..PD

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/28/2013 7:19:00 PM

Fantastic, you are so talented, congrats!

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/28/2013 7:17:00 PM

: ) Congratulations on a very fine win, Seren! Enjoyed! Love, Annalise

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/28/2013 7:08:00 PM

What a great write !! Excellent story within too. Congrats on your win !!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/28/2013 6:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win and a lekker of a poem. Love, Joyce

Scott Howard Myers The Gypsy King

Date: 2/28/2013 4:53:00 PM

Writing with thoughtful intelligence captivates me....and it is rhythmical..good job.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/28/2013 4:30:00 PM

What a great approach to the contest.......and acrostic poem.....this is a delight!! Congratulations, Seren!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2013 4:19:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/28/2013 12:23:00 PM

Congrats on you big win. I loved your Acrostic. Connie

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/28/2013 2:19:00 PM

Thank you Connie...Seren

Wayland Bunch

Date: 1/31/2013 2:17:00 AM

Soup mail.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2013 3:09:00 PM

Enjoyed your creative work for the contest..Winners' circle for sure..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 4:54:00 PM

awww Sara thats a nice thing to say, we will see....Seren

The Situation

Date: 1/30/2013 2:47:00 AM

Really, you should catch and release.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 6:45:00 AM

sorry I dont know what you mean, can you explain please....Seren

David Williams

Date: 1/30/2013 1:15:00 AM

Star, ha ...happy that your legs are fine, PS. only got your word for that lol.. I like it...David soup mail

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 6:44:00 AM

Dafydd, lol you doubt me , thanks for liking my Lekker....Seren

Wayland Bunch

Date: 1/30/2013 12:47:00 AM

Ah ha, now I know what an acoustic poem is. I would have felt silly looking it up now that it's so obvious. I wasn't going to look at this, not knowing the form, but glad I did. I learned something. I was actually going to write one of these the other day lol, glad I stuck to free verse and learned what the style is first. Now my thankfulness is a duality like everything else I see lol, one for sharing this wonderful poem, the other for inadvertently teaching me something.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 6:44:00 AM

my pleasure in being able to help you...glad you enjoy some of my work...Seren

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/29/2013 10:15:00 PM

Dreaming of getting married is the most wonderful dream of any single woman. You have made all the pieces of the puzzle fit together well here.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/29/2013 10:38:00 PM

Thank you Robert for stopping by and leaving a comment......Seren