Seren Roberts Poet Acrostic

Lekker Contest

L ooking good she thinks, looking slim
E yeing the glow that's coming from within 
K nowing that all eyes will be upon her
K neeling at the altar will be LEKKER
E very person will have eyes that stream
R econstructed legs has allowed this dream

D oesn't know when pain will ease
R emarked on the baskets of doves for release
E yes now misted over Tad must be my guide
A t the stroke of 12 ,my husband will be at my side
M aking me for sure the happiest bride

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Poet Destroyer A March 1, 2013 at 9:41 PM love your winning poem..PD

Richard Lamoureux February 28, 2013 at 7:19 PM Fantastic, you are so talented, congrats!

Audrey Haick February 28, 2013 at 7:17 PM : ) Congratulations on a very fine win, Seren! Enjoyed! Love, Annalise

Debra Squyres February 28, 2013 at 7:08 PM What a great write !! Excellent story within too. Congrats on your win !!

Joyce Johnson February 28, 2013 at 6:44 PM Congratulations on your big win and a lekker of a poem. Love, Joyce

Scott Howard Myers The Gypsy King February 28, 2013 at 4:53 PM Writing with thoughtful intelligence captivates me....and it is rhythmical..good job.

Carrie Richards February 28, 2013 at 4:30 PM What a great approach to the contest.......and acrostic poem.....this is a delight!! Congratulations, Seren!

Sara Kendrick February 28, 2013 at 4:19 PM Congrats on your great win..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve February 28, 2013 at 12:23 PM Congrats on you big win. I loved your Acrostic. Connie Seren Roberts February 28, 2013 at 2:19 PM Thank you Connie...Seren

Wayland Bunch January 31, 2013 at 2:17 AM Soup mail.

Sara Kendrick January 30, 2013 at 3:09 PM Enjoyed your creative work for the contest..Winners' circle for sure..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...Sara Seren Roberts January 30, 2013 at 4:54 PM awww Sara thats a nice thing to say, we will see....Seren

The Situation January 30, 2013 at 2:47 AM Really, you should catch and release. Seren Roberts January 30, 2013 at 6:45 AM sorry I dont know what you mean, can you explain please....Seren

David Williams January 30, 2013 at 1:15 AM Star, ha ...happy that your legs are fine, PS. only got your word for that lol.. I like it...David soup mail Seren Roberts January 30, 2013 at 6:44 AM Dafydd, lol you doubt me , thanks for liking my Lekker....Seren

Wayland Bunch January 30, 2013 at 12:47 AM Ah ha, now I know what an acoustic poem is. I would have felt silly looking it up now that it's so obvious. I wasn't going to look at this, not knowing the form, but glad I did. I learned something. I was actually going to write one of these the other day lol, glad I stuck to free verse and learned what the style is first. Now my thankfulness is a duality like everything else I see lol, one for sharing this wonderful poem, the other for inadvertently teaching me something. Seren Roberts January 30, 2013 at 6:44 AM my pleasure in being able to help you...glad you enjoy some of my work...Seren

Robert Pettit January 29, 2013 at 10:15 PM Dreaming of getting married is the most wonderful dream of any single woman. You have made all the pieces of the puzzle fit together well here. Seren Roberts January 29, 2013 at 10:38 PM Thank you Robert for stopping by and leaving a comment......Seren