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Legos Nursery Rhymes

My bedroom has a rug on the wood floor, Many colorful squares are everywhere. I made a tall blue tower up my door, It went into the pretty orange air. Building away from the Lego red bear, Rusty the red bear wants to tickle me. Up the tall blue tower I now must flee.

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Len Gasun

Date: 12/2/2023 6:02:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your 2nd place win my dear poet friend! This is a gorgeous and delightful lego fun rhyme. I extremely enjoyed reading it this morning. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. I hope you're well my dearest friend. Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/3/2023 7:11:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Legos Nursery Rhymes" write. It was fun to write. I am OK. Hope you are also OK. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/29/2023 5:37:00 PM

"2 Place" Legos Nursery Rhymes~Date Written:10/31/2023

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2023 8:59:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the LEGO contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/29/2023 5:46:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away.............

Eve Roper

Date: 11/29/2023 8:17:00 AM

Well written poem ,Paula, congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/29/2023 5:45:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Legos Nursery Rhymes" write. I enjoyed writing it for your contest. Thanks for the fun contest and for the placement. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Lin Lane

Date: 11/7/2023 7:45:00 AM

I could clearly envision the room, the Legos and you smiling while erecting the tall blue tower. Good luck with your entry, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/7/2023 10:23:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed this write. Legos are a fun toy for all ages. They put smiles on the faces. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/4/2023 6:12:00 AM

Awwn, this is such an adorable lego poem, I can feel that colourful embracing aura all around, full of magical cuddles of childhood reveries.. Soooo cute!! I absolutely enjoyed reading this very much, love it :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/5/2023 7:50:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you found my fun toy write to be adorable/cute/you love it. That put a smile on my heart. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/1/2023 1:06:00 PM

- A cute Lego poem, Paula :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/2/2023 10:09:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your GL. Glad you enjoyed my fun Lego toy write. Hugs.... Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2023 9:12:00 AM

Ahh!! Some children will enjoy this one after experiencing Legos' creativity excitement. I have a grandson who loves to put those together. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page with delightful comments. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/2/2023 9:58:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my fun toy write. Yes, kids love to play with creative/fun Legos. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/1/2023 8:02:00 AM

Your descriptions bring forth the adorable images. Splendidly done, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/2/2023 9:56:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my fun toy write. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/1/2023 1:07:00 AM

Adorable Paula! This poem tickled my heart! So very cute :) <3

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/2/2023 9:56:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you found my fun write to be adorable/cute/tickled your heart. That makes me happy to hear. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Ink Empress

Date: 10/31/2023 10:23:00 PM

This is so cute! I love also your rhymes and those last lines made me smile! Very well written . Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/2/2023 9:53:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you found my fun write to be cute/well written. Also glad it made you smile. Smiles are free so give them away.... "Smile" Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2023 7:13:00 PM

SO cute!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2023 8:29:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you found my write to be so cute. I enjoyed writing this one... Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/31/2023 6:17:00 PM

Well-composed poem with a nice nursery rhyme and funny thoughts. Best of luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2023 8:28:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over and for your best of luck. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. Have a wonderful day writing away.............

David Fisher

Date: 10/31/2023 5:22:00 PM

Fun and playful!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2023 8:27:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you found my write to be fun/playful. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/31/2023 2:39:00 PM

clever Lego poem. Hope you get away from the Rusty the Red Bear. enjoyed the light read, thanks, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2023 8:26:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun Legos Nursery Rhymes write. Yes, we got away from Rusty the red bear... Have a wonderful day writing away..............