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Your smile Your hug Your kiss Your caress Your tenderness Holding you in the night Perfume scented tranquility Bringing me humility Your breath upon my chest Is my life, till the day I rest In my grave Missing you

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/27/2017 10:28:00 PM

very sad :'( , but beautiful

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/24/2017 5:50:00 PM

Such sweet melancholy musings, Arthur. Most of us know that loss loving feeling. Topaz heart of soul poetry, my dear friend. Love and peace forever.

White Wolf

Date: 11/23/2017 11:04:00 PM

Oh, Great Bear!!! After reading this I now know I prefer to be a reader than a writer! Great imagery as well as beautiful

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/24/2017 2:10:00 PM

You are to kind, but thanks White Wolf

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/23/2017 4:46:00 PM

love eternal well portrayed, dear arthur... much enjoyed!..huggs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/24/2017 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Nette! :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/23/2017 7:35:00 AM

Sad and longing, Arthur, well expressed:)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/24/2017 2:09:00 PM

Hello Jo, thank you so much!

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/22/2017 10:52:00 PM

So heartfelt my friend.... loved it....Seren

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/24/2017 2:08:00 PM

Thank you my friend!

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/22/2017 10:00:00 PM

Arthur, poignant heartfelt longing so beautifully, passionately and poetically expressed.. Lovely sadness!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/24/2017 2:08:00 PM

Thank you Susan

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/22/2017 10:52:00 AM

At our sunset...so shall it be...Beautiful poem to reflect on...All the best Arthur

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/24/2017 2:08:00 PM

Many thanks Arturo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 11/22/2017 9:17:00 AM

Beautifully penned Arthur, poignant. Brings to mind "Streatched on your grave" by Sinead O'Connor, a similarly haunting piece. A fave xomo (your poem I mean, the song true too :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/24/2017 2:08:00 PM

I will have to listen! Thanks Maureen!