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Your smile
Your hug
Your kiss
Your caress
Your tenderness

Holding you in the night
Perfume scented tranquility
Bringing me humility
Your breath upon my chest

Is my life, till the day I rest
In my grave
Missing you

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Date: 11/27/2017 10:28:00 PM
very sad :'( , but beautiful
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Date: 11/24/2017 5:50:00 PM
Such sweet melancholy musings, Arthur. Most of us know that loss loving feeling. Topaz heart of soul poetry, my dear friend. Love and peace forever.
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Date: 11/23/2017 11:04:00 PM
Oh, Great Bear!!! After reading this I now know I prefer to be a reader than a writer! Great imagery as well as beautiful
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Date: 11/24/2017 2:10:00 PM
You are to kind, but thanks White Wolf
Date: 11/23/2017 4:46:00 PM
love eternal well portrayed, dear arthur... much enjoyed!..huggs
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Date: 11/24/2017 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Nette! :)
Date: 11/23/2017 7:35:00 AM
Sad and longing, Arthur, well expressed:)
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Date: 11/24/2017 2:09:00 PM
Hello Jo, thank you so much!
Date: 11/23/2017 3:49:00 AM
Art I loved this.... Written like you meant it! I am very impressed!
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Date: 11/24/2017 2:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Brenda
Date: 11/22/2017 10:52:00 PM
So heartfelt my friend.... loved it....Seren
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Date: 11/24/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thank you my friend!
Date: 11/22/2017 10:00:00 PM
Arthur, poignant heartfelt longing so beautifully, passionately and poetically expressed.. Lovely sadness!
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Date: 11/24/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Susan
Date: 11/22/2017 10:52:00 AM
At our sunset...so shall it be...Beautiful poem to reflect on...All the best Arthur
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Date: 11/24/2017 2:08:00 PM
Many thanks Arturo
Date: 11/22/2017 9:17:00 AM
Beautifully penned Arthur, poignant. Brings to mind "Streatched on your grave" by Sinead O'Connor, a similarly haunting piece. A fave xomo (your poem I mean, the song true too :)
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Date: 11/24/2017 2:08:00 PM
I will have to listen! Thanks Maureen!
Date: 11/22/2017 8:58:00 AM
In this one I imagine that she has passed on. A sad passionate write Arthur.
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Date: 11/24/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Richard!
Date: 11/22/2017 7:59:00 AM
Maybe she is missing you as well...reach out to her...you never know until you try
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Date: 11/24/2017 1:59:00 PM
From the grave! LOL
Date: 11/22/2017 7:55:00 AM
Very well expressed Arthur :)
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Date: 11/24/2017 1:58:00 PM
Thank you kindly Heidi.
Date: 11/22/2017 7:45:00 AM
beautiful but so sad Arthur and I love the image too:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2017 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Jan!
Date: 11/22/2017 6:19:00 AM
A lovely poem Art. even on a sad note those memories are beautiful <3
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Date: 11/24/2017 1:58:00 PM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 11/22/2017 2:43:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this well penned verse, Arthur. Excellent. T.J
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Date: 11/24/2017 1:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Teppo
Date: 11/22/2017 12:59:00 AM
A poem full of longing and memories. Lovely and sad the same time.
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Date: 11/24/2017 1:57:00 PM
Thanks Darren!