Arthur Vaso Poet Free verse

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Left Wanting

Your smile
Your hug
Your kiss
Your caress
Your tenderness

Holding you in the night
Perfume scented tranquility
Bringing me humility
Your breath upon my chest

Is my life, till the day I rest
In my grave
Missing you

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Eve Roper November 27, 2017 at 10:28 PM very sad :'( , but beautiful

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 24, 2017 at 5:50 PM Such sweet melancholy musings, Arthur. Most of us know that loss loving feeling. Topaz heart of soul poetry, my dear friend. Love and peace forever.

White Wolf November 23, 2017 at 11:04 PM Oh, Great Bear!!! After reading this I now know I prefer to be a reader than a writer! Great imagery as well as beautiful Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 2:10 PM You are to kind, but thanks White Wolf

Nette Onclaud November 23, 2017 at 4:46 PM love eternal well portrayed, dear arthur... much enjoyed!..huggs Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 2:09 PM Thank you Nette! :)

Joanna Daniel November 23, 2017 at 7:35 AM Sad and longing, Arthur, well expressed:) Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 2:09 PM Hello Jo, thank you so much!

Seren Roberts November 22, 2017 at 10:52 PM So heartfelt my friend.... loved it....Seren Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 2:08 PM Thank you my friend!

Susan Ashley November 22, 2017 at 10:00 PM Arthur, poignant heartfelt longing so beautifully, passionately and poetically expressed.. Lovely sadness! Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 2:08 PM Thank you Susan

Arturo Michael November 22, 2017 at 10:52 AM At our sunset...so shall it be...Beautiful poem to reflect on...All the best Arthur Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 2:08 PM Many thanks Arturo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 22, 2017 at 9:17 AM Beautifully penned Arthur, poignant. Brings to mind "Streatched on your grave" by Sinead O'Connor, a similarly haunting piece. A fave xomo (your poem I mean, the song true too :) Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 2:08 PM I will have to listen! Thanks Maureen!

Tim Smith November 22, 2017 at 7:59 AM Maybe she is missing you as well...reach out to her...you never know until you try Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 1:59 PM From the grave! LOL

Heidi Sands November 22, 2017 at 7:55 AM Very well expressed Arthur :) Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 1:58 PM Thank you kindly Heidi.

Jan Allison November 22, 2017 at 7:45 AM beautiful but so sad Arthur and I love the image too:-) hugs jan xx Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 1:58 PM Thanks Jan!

Sara Ella November 22, 2017 at 6:19 AM A lovely poem Art. even on a sad note those memories are beautiful <3 Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 1:58 PM Thank you Sara!

Darren White November 22, 2017 at 12:59 AM A poem full of longing and memories. Lovely and sad the same time. Arthur Vaso November 24, 2017 at 1:57 PM Thanks Darren!