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Left Mystified

I read your piece with an open mind, it left me mystified with more questions on your reasoning no offense, no comment...

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/22/2010 7:47:00 PM

nope, haven't forgotten, Missy! haha do I come across as THAT forgetful?? eep-- but yup getting to know other people's dishes is definitely interesting :) it would be so boring to only stick to one kind of dish! :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/22/2010 7:29:00 PM

btw I am not really having high hopes with that write of mine, haha people might find it too gruesome and a turn off...but that was the first thought that popped to mind when I saw that contest ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/22/2010 7:27:00 PM

really now, Miss Choir member?? uh-uh I don't believe in your lack of singing talent! :p-- go let those vocal chords free :) I know you're singing along, missy! ;) and haha I dare you to taste dinuguan in the future-- ask your Pinoy friend about it :D --haha my captcha is "rapp"-- maybe you are rapping now?

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 10/21/2010 6:21:00 PM

It conveys the bafflement that mystery should have. You have executed the content very well. I like this. Regartds and thank you! Gerard

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/17/2010 10:10:00 AM

oh this is really good! and I bet this will be in the winners' list-- and thank goodness I still make sense-- haha you and me both, the sun can make us go crazy I think--

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2010 12:03:00 AM

OH, I love this (it's for that one contest about cmments?) LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/16/2010 8:40:00 PM

Like this one Wilma..if for the contest good luck my dear friend... nice way to present your lines and idea ..luv.. great title too..

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/16/2010 4:35:00 PM

Simply put, when you have nothing to say, simply move on....Great Tanka, Wilma..Love it. Wishing you good luck in the contest! Hope your weekend's great! Love, Audrey

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2010 12:40:00 PM

Exactly how some pieces translate to me too. I like the simplicity of this polite and truthful explanation! Well said, Wilma!~ Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 10/16/2010 12:06:00 PM

To the point and truthful Wilma. Some of the poems I have read have been well over my head. Good luck in the contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/16/2010 11:49:00 AM

My sentiments exactly, Wilma. Sometimes I read a poem over and over and still don't know what the writer means. Best wishes in the contest! Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/16/2010 11:33:00 AM

Wilma, I can really relate to your feelings here. If you don't understand a poem, how can you comment on it? Good luck in the contest!