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Left Behind Swagger

She swaggers over to our table Whips out her pad from her apron Pencil poised What’cha want Hon? She drawls Soft pink lips in a little twinkled pout The white frilled design Bust’n out in all the boxum places Our “Two Specials with coffee” reply Brought a smile I like it fast and easy like that she laughs as she saches her swagger back to place our order you can’t help but notice that her perfume lingers in still air as if the shadow of her swagger was left behind written 9-5-2019 SWAGGER Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/7/2019 10:07:00 PM
This is so well-narrated, Jeanne. I can just picture this gal. Really good!! Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 9/7/2019 7:46:00 AM
Hi Jeanne, I enjoyed take on the contest theme. Great description of swagger. Congratulations on 2nd place win. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/6/2019 9:31:00 AM
A wonderful slice of life with a swagger in it's step. Best wishes in the contest Jeanne.
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Date: 9/6/2019 8:50:00 AM
This was also fun - I enjoyed it and wish you all the best in the contest :)
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Date: 9/6/2019 7:17:00 AM
This is wonderful! Captivating delicious poetry, a fave :))) Good luck in the contest! A winner for me. xomo
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2019 7:37:00 AM
ahh...thanks so much for that. xoxo
Date: 9/6/2019 6:53:00 AM
Simply loved how you describe swagger!;)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2019 7:41:00 AM
thank you so much Brenda! Have a great day. xoxo
Date: 9/6/2019 5:28:00 AM
Smile, You are full of description and poetic talent, winning wishes are being sent your way dear, take care, have a great day.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2019 7:38:00 AM
Thanks for bringing me my morning smile and kind words Pixie.
Date: 9/6/2019 4:40:00 AM
A swaggerish swaggerly swagger poem that will make Line swagger! Ha!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2019 7:40:00 AM
Ha...and you got a laugh out of me with your swagger.

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