Left Behind

what a sunrise!
what a day!
God in front
to take all good deed people
all in line for god to select
I alone was left behind
unhappy unsatisfied i asked
"why not me?
i help i donate
never i asked for your help
never i cheated to top
never i wanted partiality
never i wanted to be selected
never i was unsatisfied
never i asked anything from you 
never i was furious
never i had ill thoughts
never i wanted to harm others
i wanted happiness all around
always i loved beings
then why not me?
why why and why?"
god politely replied
"see flash back
you proved all things said wrong
you want heaven from me
you want me to be partial
you are furious
you want to be selected
you are unsatisfied.

this was a test for heaven
which all had given
proving wrong but trying hard
you are proved wrong for this time
so i keep you on earth for a noble cause
the one you did
spreading HAPPINESS
live life without want"

suddenly god disappeared
leaving me with a new view of life
so i will try try try

                                                  vrushani thaker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Lo Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 8:12 AM
..Amen to this one!..well written..we cannot question God's love, for God is Love..:)
Kapoor Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 11:45 AM
Nice conflict and lovely conclusion which you have brought in last of the Poem 'so i keep you on earth for a noble cause the one you did, spreading HAPPINESS live life without want'. Beautiful analysis of human cry for heaven. Love and best wishes...Ravindra.....Vrushani Thaker.
Thaker Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 7:15 AM
thnk u very much....Mr. kapoor....i felt really gud....
A   Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 4:15 PM
well done the concept of a message is needed when we are left behind,..p.d.
Henderson Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 11:53 PM
very nice vrushani, I will try also. Charles
Nubani Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Creative imaginary write, keep it up, and thx for ur comment on mind :D
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 4:22 PM
Wonderful contest entry ..good luck .. with this brilliant and creative write tonight.. expressive and impressive Vrushani... with luv..
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