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(Leeza, my roommate Lisa’s little sister, was off-tha-hook earlier this summer) thirteen peach flesh fabuk buster nu-metal priss sexless breasts bitten fingernails dirty babyskin feet mirror mesmerized straight-eyed honesty grouchapottamus without analysis corollary sister wide eyed hot mess skinny pacer bella doe . . Webster: Corollary: something that naturally follows another (like sisters) slang… off tha hook = out of control fabuk = rotten banana buster = acts like a punk-b*tch nu-metal = new generation heavy metal, hated by purists priss = baby grouchapottamus = someone perpetually grouchy and edgy hot mess = a handful, a piece of work, a colorful character. pacer = very smart, hard to keep up with, sets the pace bella = someone to handle with care doe = girl Krispy = super exclusive *Update: Leeza tested into some krispy math-camp and that apparently calmed her down.

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Date: 7/24/2023 6:07:00 AM
Well, this is different
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Anais Vionet
Date: 7/24/2023 6:11:00 AM
Ha! Yeah, I started jotting down impressions of Leeza, to use in a poem or story. Then, looking at the list, I thought, hmm, these kind of say it all. *shrug* Thanks for the comment =]

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