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Lee's Death

Christopher Carson Burton Lee’s Death Lee’s death was a tragic a tragic that I knew my beloved Princess was gone. When she died in my arms I felt sad, and mad about why would the Lord leave me here alone to suffer. I just wish that the magic of my wish would just bring her back. I just can’t mourn and feel sorrow over her tragic loss. I just want my magic to work In her beloved eyes I sense that she is scared to be up with the Beloved Lord. I can’t breathe without her light I suffocate when her mighty self isn’t near me My tears, is like the night that witness something tragic. Death surrounds my sorrow Death will never let me see tomorrow Without her I die too My sensitivity feelings lies in her. I am and will always be her lover of memories This is the end of my own life my love as I take my own life away by drinking thy poison of sins my love I am hopeless without you my love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/4/2016 5:12:00 PM
Nice poem, but the form you selected is wrong. This is not a "Ghazal".... Maybe free verse....
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:35:00 PM
Sad write, Cmack,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:17:00 PM
Cmack, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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