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Leelanau Calling

Just as bees squeeze like watermelon seeds Spit across apricot fields My wife and I on Friday Join the lines of highways up north Pulled by hilltops to the Leelanau blue sky Where lakes stir in the wind at the citrus rims Of wine valleys below And cherry orchards blossom in row after row Like sheets of cupcakes spiraled with frosting. Tonight we will sit tight around our lakeside fire As petals closed upon this blaze of flower With a Loon trilling her flute of bones To the stars salted across the night And voices bump from shore to shore Murmurs softened beyond repair The cabins flickering to a second life In a fuse of fire lit around our lake A tradition. We stop the car a ways away From my mom and dad’s cabin And let out our kids on the shoulder of road To run like deer the final half mile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/20/2021 4:14:00 PM
Love your last line ~ the release of energetic joy explodes. So glad to see this delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology.
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Date: 7/7/2019 3:03:00 PM
A breathless read from me. Your imagery is exquisite in this beautiful and heart warming POTD! I loved the ending that delights the heart! A Fave from me my friend. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 7/4/2019 9:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD. A favorite
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 7/5/2019 1:31:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 7/4/2019 7:56:00 PM
"Whispers heard for miles across this emptiness" Such a beautiful thought, as many moments are carried along the wind. You paint such vivid images with your words. A journey within the pages of poetry. Congratulations Robert, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/4/2019 4:42:00 PM
Congrats on POTD! Much deserved!
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 7/4/2019 6:14:00 PM
Kim: A special thank you to you. I am most grateful. Your Friend Bob
Date: 7/4/2019 2:56:00 PM
Excellent poetry Robert. Congratulations on POTD honors. Happy 4th ~Charlie
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Date: 7/4/2019 10:59:00 AM
thank you very much for sharing, and congrats on a well earned POTD :)
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 7/4/2019 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Tracy.
Date: 7/4/2019 10:56:00 AM
Well crafted my friend...Congrats on your POTD!! Robert...happy endings...^WW^
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 7/4/2019 10:57:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/4/2019 10:16:00 AM
I was swept up and away on a wonderful trip in the lush and dynamic imagery of your exquisite poem, Robert. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 7/4/2019 10:54:00 AM
Susan you are most kind thank you.
Date: 7/4/2019 8:59:00 AM
A big one...Always pleasantly surprised by your writing style...your choice of words...and the passion you bring alive in your poems... Best of the best Susan
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 7/4/2019 10:54:00 AM
:)
Date: 7/4/2019 8:50:00 AM
Excellent poeming. Some really good imagery, and the last lines are perfect. If I may - suggest fewer adjectives, sometimes less is more. However, this is a fine poem and I salute you.
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 7/4/2019 11:10:00 AM
I work hard at these Eric so I welcome help and critique always. Thank you!
Date: 7/4/2019 7:33:00 AM
Knocked it over the fence, this time! Such rich and unexpected images. Marvelous!
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Date: 7/4/2019 7:14:00 AM
You've made a drive pleasant and safe...with lots of lovely imagery...Congratulations Robert...
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Date: 7/4/2019 6:27:00 AM
beautifully written with magnificent imagery.....a festival of visual taunts
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Date: 7/2/2019 8:06:00 AM
Your imagery is fantastic, but the last two lines are CLASSIC! This is a fav for me. Kim, thank you for telling me about this poem.
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 7/2/2019 8:31:00 AM
You're always most kind Caren. Thank you for making my little day :)
Date: 7/2/2019 7:39:00 AM
If the imagery wasn’t enough...ooh, loved the end! I can see the joy in their faces plus the burst of energy released! A fave for me!!
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 7/2/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)

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