Leelanau Calling

Just as bees squeeze like watermelon seeds
Spit across apricot fields
My wife and I on Friday
Join the lines of highways up north

Pulled by hilltops to the Leelanau blue sky

Where lakes stir in the wind at the citrus rims
Of wine valleys below
And cherry orchards blossom in row after row
Like sheets of cupcakes spiraled with frosting.

Tonight we will sit tight around our lakeside fire
As petals closed upon this blaze of flower
With a Loon trilling her flute of bones
To the stars salted across the night

And voices bump from shore to shore
Murmurs softened beyond repair
The cabins flickering to a second life
In a fuse of fire lit around our lake

A tradition. We stop the car a ways away
From my mom and dad’s cabin
And let out our kids on the shoulder of road
To run like deer the final half mile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 4:14 PM
Love your last line ~ the release of energetic joy explodes. So glad to see this delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 3:03 PM
A breathless read from me. Your imagery is exquisite in this beautiful and heart warming POTD! I loved the ending that delights the heart! A Fave from me my friend. Congratulations! : )
Roper Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 9:37 PM
Beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD. A favorite
Trezise Jr. Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Thank you!
Nicole Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 7:56 PM
"Whispers heard for miles across this emptiness" Such a beautiful thought, as many moments are carried along the wind. You paint such vivid images with your words. A journey within the pages of poetry. Congratulations Robert, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 4:42 PM
Congrats on POTD! Much deserved!
Trezise Jr. Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 6:14 PM
Kim: A special thank you to you. I am most grateful. Your Friend Bob
Messina Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 2:56 PM
Excellent poetry Robert. Congratulations on POTD honors. Happy 4th ~Charlie
Storrier Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 10:59 AM
thank you very much for sharing, and congrats on a well earned POTD :)
Trezise Jr. Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 11:09 AM
Thank you Tracy.
Warrior Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Well crafted my friend...Congrats on your POTD!! Robert...happy endings...^WW^
Trezise Jr. Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Thank you!
Ashley Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 10:16 AM
I was swept up and away on a wonderful trip in the lush and dynamic imagery of your exquisite poem, Robert. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Trezise Jr. Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 10:54 AM
Susan you are most kind thank you.
Sands Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 8:59 AM
A big one...Always pleasantly surprised by your writing style...your choice of words...and the passion you bring alive in your poems... Best of the best Susan
Trezise Jr. Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 10:54 AM
:)
Ashford Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Excellent poeming. Some really good imagery, and the last lines are perfect. If I may - suggest fewer adjectives, sometimes less is more. However, this is a fine poem and I salute you.
Trezise Jr. Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 11:10 AM
I work hard at these Eric so I welcome help and critique always. Thank you!
Fairchild Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Knocked it over the fence, this time! Such rich and unexpected images. Marvelous!
Michael Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 7:14 AM
You've made a drive pleasant and safe...with lots of lovely imagery...Congratulations Robert...
Lawless Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 6:27 AM
beautifully written with magnificent imagery.....a festival of visual taunts
Krutsinger Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 8:06 AM
Your imagery is fantastic, but the last two lines are CLASSIC! This is a fav for me. Kim, thank you for telling me about this poem.
Trezise Jr. Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 8:31 AM
You're always most kind Caren. Thank you for making my little day :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 7:39 AM
If the imagery wasn’t enough...ooh, loved the end! I can see the joy in their faces plus the burst of energy released! A fave for me!!
Trezise Jr. Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Thank you Kim :)
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