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LEAVING THE PASSENGERS BEHIND

LEAVING THE PASSENGERS BEHIND

chartreuse
                  caboose 
footloose 
                  vamoose

The overworked     chartreuse caboose     spun,
ran off the track    footloose     vamoose     done.

1/18/2018

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Date: 1/23/2018 10:10:00 PM
Unfamiliar form to me, but I like it. Trying to enjoy. love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2018 10:16:00 PM
Thanks, Anisha!
Date: 1/23/2018 3:55:00 PM
This is a fine Tyburn, Kim; follows the rules perfectly. I found this form challenging and time consuming. Hope it was worth the effort!:) Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thanks! I actually enjoy writing these!
Date: 1/20/2018 11:20:00 AM
what a great example, you have set us a real challenge Kim!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2018 3:13:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan :)
Date: 1/19/2018 10:22:00 PM
Excellent, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2018 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Laura :)
Date: 1/19/2018 6:53:00 PM
It's a very difficult form and you came up with a good witty one, Kim as your model. Soup mail!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2018 9:01:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 1/19/2018 4:05:00 PM
Kim, a hard form to have make sense, will give it a try though, great example
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2018 4:49:00 PM
Thanks, Constance!
Date: 1/19/2018 3:30:00 PM
i dont know what a chartreuse is....but can i get footloose with this....and if you ever find Love's caboose....what you feel will be beyond vamoose....Love the rhyme kim....;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2018 3:34:00 PM
Thanks, Eric!
Date: 1/19/2018 8:07:00 AM
I'm not familiar with this form but what fun! Thoroughly enjoyed this! Delightful ink :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2018 9:20:00 AM
I hope you give it a try in my contest :)
Date: 1/19/2018 7:13:00 AM
A fun read, Kim..you paint a vivid picture of the caboose in a hurry..having been set free..done well in just a few words.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 1/19/2018 6:58:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant Kim, you make this difficult form look so easy, very clever and interesting, great job. :))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Roy! :)
Date: 1/19/2018 6:03:00 AM
Interesting form Kim, will have to check it out..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2018 6:25:00 AM
Thanks!