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Leaving the Passengers Behind

LEAVING THE PASSENGERS BEHIND chartreuse caboose footloose vamoose The overworked chartreuse caboose spun, ran off the track footloose vamoose done. 1/18/2018

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/23/2018 10:10:00 PM

Unfamiliar form to me, but I like it. Trying to enjoy. love.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2018 10:16:00 PM

Thanks, Anisha!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/23/2018 3:55:00 PM

This is a fine Tyburn, Kim; follows the rules perfectly. I found this form challenging and time consuming. Hope it was worth the effort!:) Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2018 4:00:00 PM

Thanks! I actually enjoy writing these!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/20/2018 11:20:00 AM

what a great example, you have set us a real challenge Kim!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2018 3:13:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jan :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/19/2018 10:22:00 PM

Excellent, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2018 7:24:00 AM

Thank you, Laura :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2018 6:53:00 PM

It's a very difficult form and you came up with a good witty one, Kim as your model. Soup mail!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2018 9:01:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Constance La France

Date: 1/19/2018 4:05:00 PM

Kim, a hard form to have make sense, will give it a try though, great example

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2018 4:49:00 PM

Thanks, Constance!

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/19/2018 3:30:00 PM

i dont know what a chartreuse is....but can i get footloose with this....and if you ever find Love's caboose....what you feel will be beyond vamoose....Love the rhyme kim....;)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2018 3:34:00 PM

Thanks, Eric!