Leaving May Behind

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Still brook reflects the morning silver light
damselflies play chase between the reeds
dun cygnets now awash in virgin white
as through the mist a new dawn slowly bleeds.

Bare branches splay, verdant in gloves of green
pink blossom proudly flaunts the shawl it wears
the willow, many months stood shy, unseen
now brilliant, branches arcing like a flare.

I, too, feel something must emerge within
in concert with Spring's promise, hopes arise
leaving dark thoughts behind, what might have been
and see afresh the future with new eyes.

Each year this season nature freely gives,
give thanks, arise, move on, and truly live.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/3/2017 8:53:00 PM
A beautiful write Viv, my favorite of your new posts. Again welcome back.
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Date: 6/24/2017 3:09:00 PM
Great sonnet Viv, nice to see you posting again, last couplet is special, good advice!
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Date: 6/27/2017 11:44:00 PM
Thanks John, I have little spare time nowadays, but will jump into the soup when I can. Regards, Viv
Date: 6/11/2017 8:03:00 AM
Viv, this is a beautiful sonnet! I love how you've described everything. So good to see you back!
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Date: 6/12/2017 1:03:00 AM
Thanks, Becca, sorry I've not been around for a long while, my good lady hasn't been too well, and I've had my share of ups and downs too. I shall pop by the soup when I can. You still look as lovely as ever, by the way, if not lovelierer. If that's not a word, it should be. Viv x
Date: 6/10/2017 6:22:00 PM
I love your sonnets my friend. Always each informs and delights when read. Great flow superb imagery and depth that enhances clear message.. This one on May, Nature and imagery that ties to human hopes and promises sings clear and loud.. A gem, a fav too....
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Date: 6/11/2017 1:33:00 AM
Thanks, Robert. Please forgive me for making the poet's cardinal error of using the word 'verdant'- it is akin to walking into a guitar shop and trying out a guitar by playing the opening bars of 'smoke on the water' by Deep Purple. Unforgiveable.... Regards, Viv
Date: 6/9/2017 12:42:00 PM
Yes. Hopes arise to see future with new eyes. Enjoyed the sweet sonnet.
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Date: 6/11/2017 1:34:00 AM
Thanks, Anisha, I'm glad you like it. Viv x
Date: 6/7/2017 12:09:00 AM
Hi Viv! Saw you online and so dropped by, loved this poem! and great to see you back mate!
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Date: 6/11/2017 1:35:00 AM
Thanks, Arthur, I haven't had a lot of time for poetry recently, lots of family health issues and stuff. Will try to get back more often. Regards, Viv
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