Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

Leaving a Kiss

LEAVING A KISS

Shall I leave you a kiss?

Kiss that flowers a love forevermore.
Love that long been just figments of doubts
but if it is you, I will plant my trust.
Sweet tasty things be stirring in hush.

Pathways twisted shall flourish as they uncoil.
Readying a road for baby passion to freely swirl
Emotions constellate shimmering rainbow bright
Moonshine thrives magnifying fine wine delight

If gnawing beastly storms seeps then enclose
breaking to pieces the sky, the sea and our earth
Bitter tears will spill flooding veins in dark haste
slowly killing everything that grows

But upon love kiss on lips of faith and hope
a spark shall dwell cracking perpetual life
banging the taunts twining pain and strife
Resurrecting progress in blooms of green and red
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(c) OLive Eloisa
2:57pm
September 09,2014

Contest Name	The Poet II 
THEME: LEAVE YOU A KISS
Placed 4th

POEM OF THE DAY -- SEPTEMBER 14, 2014

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BE Bailey November 13, 2014 at 7:32 AM A job well done Olive. I love what you did here. Great piece. Hugs "B" Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 6, 2015 at 8:10 AM thanks much BE bailey. :)!

Gautami Phookan September 15, 2014 at 1:34 AM A very nice write.. Congrats Olive on your win!love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 19, 2014 at 7:49 AM thanks much Gautami. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 14, 2014 at 10:46 PM Enjoy the top place win of this wonderful write, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 19, 2014 at 7:34 AM thanks very mych Dr Ram . :)

Joyce Johnson September 14, 2014 at 6:04 PM Congratulations on great poem and win. Love, Joyce Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 15, 2014 at 8:01 AM Thanks Joyce..:) GBU

Jan Allison September 14, 2014 at 1:46 PM dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 15, 2014 at 7:56 AM Thanks Jan..:) GBU

Mark Trichet September 12, 2014 at 12:09 AM Exquisite Olive! You write with Angels on your shoulders... :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:32 AM Thanks much..:)

Robert Lindley September 11, 2014 at 10:29 PM A sweet kiss and fine flowing write my friend. Congrats on this being chosen as POD!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:32 AM :) ty

Keith Baucum September 11, 2014 at 10:54 AM Great poem Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:31 AM Thanks :)

Brenda Meier-Hans September 11, 2014 at 8:15 AM Congratulations Olive on poem of the day. This is a beautifully penned poem. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:31 AM Thanks much Brenda..:) GBU

Casarah Nance September 11, 2014 at 6:54 AM You can leave me a kiss any day darlin'. a thousand cheers for your poem of the day. A beautiful dance of your words :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:30 AM Thanks much Cassie..:)

Gene Bourne September 11, 2014 at 4:40 AM Elegantly expressed composition, beautifully formatted. It beckons tne reader with an undersong from beginning to end. Emotion expressed at its best....Your PS friend...Gene. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:29 AM Thanks friend Gene..:) GBU

Anne-Lise Andresen September 11, 2014 at 4:21 AM - Olive, congratulations on poem of the day !!!! - // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:28 AM Thanks much Anne..:)

Jan Allison September 11, 2014 at 3:57 AM stunning Olive! good luck in the contest and congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:27 AM Thanks much Jan..:) hugs too..:)

Shan Vitor September 11, 2014 at 3:19 AM Hooray to a fellow Filipino :D Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:25 AM Hoooray!!:)

Tim Smith September 11, 2014 at 2:00 AM Beautiful Olive... Congrats on pod Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:24 AM Thanks much Tim for the support..:) GBU

Maurice Yvonne September 11, 2014 at 1:09 AM Congratulations on poem of the day. I liked this write the first time and like it this time. Well Done. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:21 AM Thanks much Maurice..:) GBU

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2014 at 11:38 PM Very nice, Olive!! I see you went for the kisses over the tears too. That is because you are so sweet!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 13, 2014 at 1:21 AM ThAnks much Andie..:) yes I'd like the tears but I'm finding it hard to find one that I'll let out in a happy note..:) GBU

Justin Bordner September 10, 2014 at 2:00 PM This poem is so inspiring Olive, the resilience, voice and determination of your love. The progress of love, planted in the mighty kiss of belief. Your language of affection is superb, the skill is so fresh yet mature in description and passion, a world saved by a kiss, Mmmmm..."but upon love kiss on lips of faith and hope, a spark shall dwell cracking perpetual life..." the storm attack is so breathtaking. A Masterpiece! J.A.B. this is way you are in my favorite file! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 11, 2014 at 11:35 AM Thanks much Justin for the generous remarks..:) though am not quite so sure of my fourth line on my 3rd stanza..:) GBU

Richard Lamoureux September 10, 2014 at 9:21 AM Beautiful! 7 rating! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 11, 2014 at 2:24 AM Thank you sir :) GBU

Arthur Vaso September 9, 2014 at 10:51 PM You may leave me as many as you wish! This is such a beautiful poem!!!! Well done!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 10, 2014 at 7:11 AM Thanks for this so jolly remark Art..:) GBU

Paul Callus September 9, 2014 at 2:15 PM Doubts and trust in a relationship are not uncommon. We trust when we know that we are on solid ground; doubts mean that there is still a lot of work to be done. Never let a kiss distort your ability to think and reason! Enjoyed this write, Olive_eloi and gl in the contest. hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 9:37 PM Sure we do trust..:) but it takes time to wholly trust.. :) I'll remember your remark.:) thanks much and well be happy all the time..:) God loves us that much to be at unhappy..:) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 9:36 PM Yes Paul.. But the kiss I mean in this poems talks much much more..:) it's not just the kissing act but more..:) as like a kiss that triggers lots of nerve endings. I use kiss a sum total of gestures and actions that can trigger lots of things..:)

Gordon Mcconnell September 9, 2014 at 1:22 PM love this , so grear a write Olive, superb writing, God bless, Gordon Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 9:34 PM Thanks much:) I enjoyed writing this too..:) GBU

James Fraser September 9, 2014 at 12:19 PM Blimey, what a kiss to be left. Absolutely wonderful to read, and surely to do well in the contest. Good luck Olive, I'll be rooting for you, James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 9:33 PM Thank you James..:) I appreciate this comment..:) GBU

Maurice Yvonne September 9, 2014 at 6:17 AM a great take on the contest challenge. i'll leave a tear of joy. Good Luck in the contest. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 9:23 PM Thanks much Maurice..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2014 at 4:33 AM - A beautiful poem, you deliver with a kiss - "But upon love kiss on the lips ....." .. of faith, hope, peace and love - I give you beautiful roses : "They are not dead" - Good luck in the contest, I hope you win ! - Have a nice day, dear Olive - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 8:28 AM Love roses.. Thanks sweet Anne Lise..:)